[Visual Arts] Hazzy's Misc. Arts :: Coloured Commission by Mew

Started by xHaZxMaTx, August 22, 2006, 10:54:47 PM

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xHaZxMaTx

Not to sound like an egomaniac, but I've never drawn this well, and I haven't drawn for quite a while.  Granted, there are still flaws (why am I leaning so far back?  and I don't think it came out too well, but my clothes are supposed to be blowing in the wind and I think my head's too big.) but practice makes perfect.  Well, you get better, anyway. :P

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Huzzah for Photoshop. :D




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You can also check out my (now defunct) 3D modeling thread here.

James StarRunner

Yes, it's got it's flaws, but that's still very good at the same time! Many artists will make a stick figure type thing first and then add on to it. It may help with the "leaning".

xHaZxMaTx

#2
Yeah, I tried that, but it apparently didn't work too well. :(

Vaguely Creepy

That's really good! Aside from blowing in the wind (which I think is pretty well done anyway), I like the detail you put into your clothes, and I probably wouldn't even have noticed the leaning if you hadn't mentioned it. The only thing I can see that's maybe a little bit off is the neck. It doesn't look quite centered between the shoulders.

Very nice job!

llearch n'n'daCorna

haz: with the sick figure stuff, blue is a good pencil, since the scanner tends to drop it if you don't press hard...

Of course, first you've got to get a blue pencil... :-)

Nice pic, though.
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Shadrok

#5
Not bad the proportions are a little off but it's still good.

This mite help with the proportions.

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Also the size of the head varies depending on age.

Adult and 15 years old = 9"
10 years old = 7 ½"
5 years old = 7"
3 years old = 6 ½"
1 year old = 6"
 

King Of Hearts

'Never could make heads or tails of the whole 8 heads thing...


'nyways, nice enough solid figure, just needs a few more details on the head and your good to go. The head's size is fine.

GabrielsThoughts

I worry mostly about wheather or not the head matches up with the body than the actual body itself.
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Tapewolf

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Shadrok

The size of the head is fine it's the measurement of the body I was pointing out.  The legs look like they're too short.
 

xHaZxMaTx

I was thinking that the legs were too short, also, but it could just be that the shirt is a little long. (I like baggy clothes.)

xHaZxMaTx

I experimented with texturing, not sure if it turned out too well, though...


llearch n'n'daCorna

Ooo. That adds a lot of depth to the image.

Nicely done, no less.
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topher chee


Nikki


Much thanks to Keaton and Haz for my sig, and King Of Hearts for my avatar. ILU guys <3

topher chee

i think itd be ok to say that

xHaZxMaTx

#16
This was my original concept, so all I pretty much had to do was draw a new head and add a tail. :lol  Though I did redo the left (your right) foot (my dad said they looked like Egyptian heiroglyphics feet) and added a little more detail to the clothing.


Tapewolf

Quite an interesting contrast - thanks for sharing it.
Somehow the clothes seem more baggy on the fox, although that's probably an illusion.
Is the head the right size proportionally, though?  I can't really be sure..

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xHaZxMaTx

#18
When I compared (excluding ears) it to the orignal (human) drawing, it was a little smaller, but I didn't think it looked 'wrong.'

Tapewolf

Quote from: ×HaZ×MaT× on August 27, 2006, 06:55:28 AM
When I compared (excluding ears) it to the orignal (human) drawing, it was a little smaller, but I didn't think it looked 'wrong.'

Wrong?  I'm not sure, but the way I see it, the fox is going to lose out in terms of brain capacity.

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xHaZxMaTx


Tapewolf

Quote from: ×HaZ×MaT× on August 27, 2006, 08:12:00 AM
Mmk, how about this?

Yeah, that's better.  Head size is something I've found hard to get right myself...

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King Of Hearts

yep, the bigger head did wonders, I have trouble with snouts messing up my head proportions, so when I do proportions I just dont include the snout into play and add it on once the base head feels right.


Nikki


Much thanks to Keaton and Haz for my sig, and King Of Hearts for my avatar. ILU guys <3

Drake Manaweilder

Methinks it could use some shading... other than that it's fine. :mowsmile

xHaZxMaTx

#25
(Dakata has a flamethrower!)

AND SHE'S USING IT ON ME!!!! D:  OMGWTFBBQ?!
<-- Sucks at drawing chibis.



Yes, I know I forgot the tail. ¬_¬

Rowne

Oh my, Dakata's packing HEAT and I'm not talking about magazines or movies.

Good job, Hazzy.  That's funny stuff.  Silly Daka thinks you're a marshmallow.

Aridas

Nooooooo! *attempts to rescue haz, but also burns*

That's a good pic.

Dakata

Wheee! Fire!

*NOT A GIRL* D: D: D:

...*Gives Hazzy a ghey hug* :B

Rowne

So~ ... I might be missing something here but what's the difference between a hug and a ghey hug?