[CVRPG Forum] - Typos

[Gabi]

Well, I did take over a week off, and I still found no typos in CVRPG when I came back.

Villains #141: "In harms way"=>"In harm's way"

[Gabi]

Villains #142 comment: "Everything lead to here."=>"Everything led to here."

[Gabi]

DSWC #144: "Romainia"=>"Romania"
DSWC #156 comment: "that man hasn't be successful once"=>"that man hasn't been successful once"
DSWC #158 comment: "the word has been done a service"=>"the world has been done a service"
DSWC #161 comment: "this notably"=>"this is notably"
DSWC #163 comment: "a evil, evil man"=>"an evil, evil man"

[Gabi]

DQ #91: "that have towns and cities"=>"they have towns and cities"
Comment: "I just kind felt like they should."=>"I just [kinda/kind of] felt like they should."

DQ #92: "call him pathetic is you want"=>"call him pathetic if you want"
Comment: "this own"=>"this owl"
And when you called the owl a giant frickin' bat... is that a joke or was that supposed to be 'owl'?


Villains #144 comment: "not the actually have"=>"not to actually have"

[Gabi]

Villains #150: there's a closing double quote after "question for the villains", but it never opens.

[Gabi]

DQ #96 comment: "this whole are"=>"this whole area"?

Also, what did you mean by "something is gelling"? Is it an idiom or something?

[Darkmoon]

Coming together, solidifying, such like Jell-o.

[Gabi]

Thanks.

DQ #99: "an specific weaknesses"=>"any specific weaknesses"

[Gabi]

Villains #161 comment: "a awful existence"=>"an awful existence"

And I completely agree.

[Gabi]

CVRPG #1541: "I'm your best friend"=>"I'm your best friend."

By the way, I read Equal Rites in Spanish. It sucked. Then I read it in English. It was actually quite good. Whoever translated it ought to be fired, if s/he hasn't been yet.

[Darkmoon]

A very good Discworld book. Very good.

[llearch n'n'daCorna]

A tricky one to translate, though. Much of it revolves around preconceptions and historical precedents. Which... would be totally different in Spain. Or anywhere else, for that matter...

[Gabi]

And the name of the town is especially hard to translate, but they could have at least come up with something that didn't sound horrendous and meaningless at the same time.

DQ #101: "you're ass"=>"your ass"

Villains #164 comment: "it's a death"=>"its death"

[Gabi]

DWSC #166 comment: "I'm amused buy the "action cam" sequence"=>"I'm amused by the "action cam" sequence"

DSWC #167: "and "chunk" or "slice of the pie" is then created for each of the percenatges"=>"a "chunk" or "slice of the pie" is then created for each of the percentages" (2 in one sentence)
Comment: "to make sure Inky was noticable Inky"=>"to make sure Inky was noticeably Inky" (2 in one word)

DSWC #169: "mtuant"=>"mutant"

DSWC #171 comment: "A odd choice"=>"An odd choice"

DSWC #172: "aliens brains"=>"alien brains"

DSWc #182 comment: "he's state right out"=>"he states right out"

DSWC #183 comment: "load that, up"=>"load that up"

DSWC #184 comment: "would could"=>"we could"

[Gabi]

CVRPG #1551 (nice number!): ""you,""=>""you"," is that makes sense.
Villains #173: "proceedure"=>"procedure"

[Gabi]

DQ 108: "purile"=>"puerile"

Also, "small intestine" would come before "spleen" either way, since M comes before P.

[Darkmoon]

Yeah, I know. I realized that after writing, but thought it was funny just to leave it as is.

[Gabi]

CVRPG #1554 title: "one in the same"=>"one and the same"

DQ #109 comment: "killing both of the"=>"killing both of them"

[Gabi]

DQ #110: "we the long view has to be taken"=>

I'm sorry, I can't understand what that means.

[Gabi]

CVRPG #1556: "lillacs"=>"lilacs"

[Darkmoon]

I shoulda just looked it up. I had it both ways when I was writing it.

[Gabi]

Villains #182: "The spend their days"=>"They spend their days"

[Gabi]

Villains #191: "survivng"=>"surviving"

[Gabi]

Villains #194: "brakfast"=>"breakfast"

[Gabi]

Holidays #0:
"become to spirit of Chanukah"=>"become the spirit of Chanukah"
"four-tones heroes"=>"four-toned heroes" or maybe "four-tone heroes"
"cuase"=>"cause"
Also, the green stocking has a P and the purple stocking has a G, it would make more sense the other way around.

Holidays #1 comment:
"Sanata"=>"Santa" (funny, "sanata" is the Argentinean equivalent for bullshit).
"only know"=>"only knowing"

Holidays #2: "if winter last longer"=>"if winter lasts longer"

Holidays #5 "lead by captive animals"=>"led by captive animals"

Holidays #6: "Santa Clause"=>"Santa Claus"
Comment: "Sanata" again.

CVRPG #1572: "place to be"=>"places to be"

DQ #120:
"made gave"=>"gave you"?
"the river has already been drained"=>"the lake has already been drained"
Comment:
"and helpful villager"=>"a helpful villager"
"adventure gave"="adventure game"

[Darkmoon]

Also, the green stocking has a P and the purple stocking has a G, it would make more sense the other way around.

Actually makes a good bit of sense... wish I'd thought of that sooner. I may have to go in and fix that...

EDIT: Done. Man, swapping out logos is a lot of work. It bothers me if the logo "jitters" between comics. Really bothers me.

[Gabi]

Holidays #12 comment: "it supposed"=>"is supposed"

Holidays #13: "missle"=>"missile"

Holidays #14: same as above, only twice.
Comment: "it's official name"=>"its official name"

Holidays #15 and #16: "dreidle"=>"dreidel" although I suppose there may be alternate spellings. Also, I've never played it.

CVRPG #1577: "villains speech"=>"villain's speech"

Villains #207: "will have to be held"=>"will have to be held."

Villains #210: "revanant"=>"revenant"

[Gabi]

Holidays #17: "missles"=>"missiles". Twice.

DQ #125: "spel inventory"=>"spell inventory"
Comment: "to right item(s)"=>"the right item(s)"

[Gabi]

DQ #126: "may have cause"=>"may have caused"

Villains #213: "sentance"=>"sentence"

[Gabi]

DQ #127: "its a special key"=>"it's a special key"