[CVRPG Forum] - Typos

Started by llearch n'n'daCorna, October 26, 2007, 06:12:14 PM

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Gabi

#750
OK, CVRPG typos up to the previous post. Now onto DSWC.

Villains 2015/05/23: "it entirely possible"=>"it's entirely possible"

Villains 2015/05/28: "cause a fair amount of sin"=>"caused a fair amount of sin"

Heroes 2015/06/08 comment: "the plotline I had in ind"=>"the plotline I had in mind"

Heroes 2015/06/10: "inelligant"=>"inelegant"

Villains 2015/06/13 comment: "years agao"=>"years ago"

Heroes 2015/06/15: "sword swinging"=>"sword-swinging"
"factual inccurate"=>"factually inaccurate"
Comment: "even thought"=>"even though"
"its a good discussion"=>"it's a good discussion"
"That also have"=>"That also has"
"Dracula's lands in a land as expansive"=>"Dracula's lands. In a land as expansive"
"explor"=>"explore"
"poisioned"=>"poisoned"
Comment: "keep revisit"=>"keep revisiting"

Villains 2015/06/18: "get the the gnolls"=>"get the gnolls"
"commrades"=>"comrades"
Comment: "worst tavern every"=>"worst tavern ever"

Villains 2015/06/23: "I don't supposed"=>"I don't suppose"
Comment: "as few of them have"=>"a few of them have"

Villains 2015/06/27: "It's good thing"=>"It's a good thing"
Heroes 2015/06/17: "wth Dracula's"=>"with Dracula's"
"detachabe"=>"detachable"
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Villains 2015/07/06 comment: did you mean DSWC, or was that CVRPG as in the whole site?

Heroes 2015/07/08 comment: "weird tongued" "weird-tongued"

Villains 2015/07/14 comment: "I actually a little sad"=>"I'm actually a little sad"

Heroes 2015/07/22 comment: "I don't like for Yoshi-Birdo slash fics"=>"I don't like Yoshi-Birdo slash fics"

Villains 2015/07/21 comment: "that kids"=>"that kid"

Heroes 2015/07/24: "masquerading as a girl"=>"masquerading as a guy" (or dude, or whatever you prefer).

Villains 2015/07/25 comment: "Something ells me"=>"Something tells me"

Hmm... Why is Thereshiri hard to pronounce? Now I'm wondering how you pronounce it.
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Gabi

OK, I've finally managed to get on the private side, so back to page numbers.

CVRPG #2591: "no where"=>"nowhere"

CVRPG #2594: "sacrasm"=>"sarcasm"

CVRPG #2598: "Its the center"=>"It's the center"

Anyway... what exactly makes Katrina's dark magic evil? I know she's using it to keep herself alive longer than she was supposed to be, but does that cause anyone any harm? Did she have to kill or hurt anyone in order to cast those spells? Is she taking some horrible risks? Otherwise I just don't see what makes it evil.
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Gabi

#753
Heroes #674: "actually a girl."=>"actually a girl?"

Heroes #675: ""no turtles: "=>""no turtles" "

Villains #679: "conidering"=>"considering"
"now in essence,"=>"now, in essence,"
"I would even exist"=>"I wouldn't even exist"

Villains #680: "counsel of Links"=>"council of Links" (counsel means advice)

Heroes #681: "thre's Hanz"=>"there's Hanz"

Heroes #684: "over-run"=>"overrun"
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Gabi

I hope you don't mind my making so many posts in a row, but I thought it was safer than editing old ones in case you've already gone through them and don't notice the edits.

Heroes #690: "recollect"=>"reconnect"?

Heroes #693: "know bout vampire?"=>"know bout vampires?"
"I dont have much time"=>"I don't have much time"

Heroes #694: "Theyre in my house"=>"They're in my house"

Heroes #696: "Just say back"=>"Just stay back"
"get eat"=>"get eaten"

Villains #696: "we didnt find"=>"we didn't find"

Villains #697: "Hell be back"=>"He'll be back"

Excerpt from the DSWC Strategy Guide (Page 34) (Heroes): "feafully twisted"=>"fearfully twisted"
"wanders of the lands"="wanderers of the lands"
"didn't forget did you?"=>"didn't forget, did you?"


Excerpt from the DSWC Strategy Guide (Page 35) (Villains): "can totall explore"=>"can totally explore"
"Or was it Jova."=>"Or was it Jova?"

Villains #702: "didnt I tell you"=>"didn't I tell you"
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Gabi

Thanks, llearch.

Villains #703: "hard fought"=>"hard-fought"

Villains #704: "I really can't"=>"You really can't"

Heroes #705: "You know what""=>"You know what?" (Now I'm wondering what keyboard layout you use).

Villains #705: "gentlemenly"=>"gentlemanly"

Heroes #706: "or build it yourself."="or build it yourself?"

Villains #707: "where's your damn rabbit at?"=>"where's your damn rabbit?" (and it may be "damned" rather than "damn")
"Silver tipped."=>"Silver-tipped."

Heroes #709: "People shaped."=>"People-shaped."

Heroes #710: "then entire block"=>"the entire block"

Heroes #711: "until you're had a shower"=>"until you've had a shower"

Heroes #712: "out foul undead"=>"out, foul undead"
"I wouldnt say"=>"I wouldn't say"

Heroes #715: "cant hear you"=>"can't hear you"

Villains #719: "over shot"=>"overshot"

Heroes #720: "rabes"=>"rabies"

Villains #720: "I thought you were dead?"=>"I thought you were dead!"

Villains #731: "this foul form you take now."=>"this foul form you take now?"

...And I've finally caught up!
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llearch n'n'daCorna

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Darkmoon

Private side exists. I just have no clue why you can't see it. That's just weird.
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Gabi

Quote from: Darkmoon on January 27, 2016, 09:03:10 PM
Private side exists. I just have no clue why you can't see it. That's just weird.
I can see it now, it just takes a while to load. Back when I posted that, I had spent several minutes waiting and it still wouldn't load, but right now it's working much better.
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Darkmoon

I think my server guy is doing maintenance on the site. That could be part of the issue.
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Gabi

Ah, makes sense.

Villains #748: "aggrivating"=>"aggravating"
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Gabi

Heroes #750: "come back for it's"=>"come back for its"

Villains #749: "cutting of the place" might be grammatically correct, but it sounds weird. I think you meant "cutting off the place".

Also, a hiatus and then the final chapter? I'm going to miss Link. :-/
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Darkmoon

Well, I kinda lied a little. There is only one more major chapter, but I actually am going to do an aside when it comes back from hiatus: a prequel telling the story of Richter's two official games in the series, this time with Cornell stitched in, since originally Cornell wasn't in Richter's games.
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Gabi

Ah, well... That should be interesting. I wonder if we'll ever get to see Cornell move like he said he used to before Richter influenced him.

Anyway, did you upload an unfinished comic?
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Darkmoon

Comic 2615? Good catch. Thanks!
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Gabi

Thanks!

New CVRPG #2615: "to know about."=>"to know about?"


#2617: "corwardly"=>"cowardly"
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Gabi

What happened to #2617? It was fine yesterday, save for a typo, and now it's incomplete.

#2618: The "What?" is outlined in Golem's color. Should be Angel's.
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Darkmoon

#768
I'll check on it...

EDIT: Server must have reverted 2617 to a previous version. Weird. I re-upped it.

#2618 is fine. It's supposed to be Golem asking that because everyone is staring at him.
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Gabi

#769
Sorry again for the delay, stuff came up. But I'm here again. Catching up with the public side, since the private side is giving me errors like
"SQLSTATE[42S02]: Base table or view not found: 1146 Table 'click2_cvrpg.help_subjects' doesn't existSQLSTATE[42S02]: Base table or view not found: 1146 Table 'click2_cvrpg.help_subjects' doesn't exist "
and I can't view the comics in there.

#2622: "herpies"=>"herpes" (By the way, are elevators with music a real thing? I keep hearing about them, but I've never actually seen one.)

#2624: "obvously"=>"obviously"

#2628: "where's everyone at?"=>"where's everyone?" (But it's Angel, so he doesn't have to speak properly).

Also, being pansexual means that sex and gender are not a factor for sexual attraction, but I don't think there's a word for someone who's attracted to "everyone, at any time", since I doubt those exist in real life. There might, though. I just haven't heard of any real cases.

#2631: "upgrde"=>"upgrade"

#2634: why did the soldier call Admiral Prelude "Sir"?

#2636: "hapen"=>"happen"
"perfom"=>"perform"

#2641/2: Alpha Centauri... B? Wouldn't that be Beta Centauri?

#2650: "no on really cares"="no one really cares"

#2652: I'm pretty sure "spaceship" is a single word.

#2654: "stedily"=>"steadily"

#2661: "that given distances"=>"that given distance"

#2662: "diarreah"=>"diarrhea"

#2665: "it's not as i I"=>"it's not as if I"

#2666: "never mnd"=>"never mind"
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Darkmoon

#770
Comic view is down in the private side and probably won't come back until the CVRPG server is upgraded. Dunno when that'll happen.

However, you can use the little key icon on the site to login to the private view and catch up on comics there.

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#2628: "where's everyone at?"=>"where's everyone?" (But it's Angel, so he doesn't have to speak properly).

Yeah, it's improper grammar, but it is casual sounding, and that's what mattered.

Also, being pansexual means that sex and gender are not a factor for sexual attraction, but I don't think there's a word for someone who's attracted to "everyone, at any time", since I doubt those exist in real life. There might, though. I just haven't heard of any real cases.

Maybe xenosexual. I doubt it's a word, but it is more accurate. Honestly, that's the kind of comment you could put on the site, let the others debate it out. ;)

#2634: why did the soldier call Admiral Prelude "Sir"?

Far as I'm aware, the military is gender-neutral. Last I knew, female officers were still called "sir" -- at least in the United States military.

#2641/2: Alpha Centauri... B? Wouldn't that be Beta Centauri?

Alpha Centauri is actually three stars in a trinary system -- two large stars orbiting each other in a closer orbit, with Alpha Centauri C, a red dwarf, in a wider orbit. Each star also, presumably has planets around it.
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llearch n'n'daCorna

Quote from: Darkmoon on May 24, 2016, 10:00:33 PM
Also, being pansexual means that sex and gender are not a factor for sexual attraction, but I don't think there's a word for someone who's attracted to "everyone, at any time", since I doubt those exist in real life. There might, though. I just haven't heard of any real cases.

Maybe xenosexual. I doubt it's a word, but it is more accurate. Honestly, that's the kind of comment you could put on the site, let the others debate it out. ;)

How about "slut"? ;-]
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Gabi

Quote from: llearch n'n'daCorna on May 25, 2016, 08:45:30 AM
Quote from: Darkmoon on May 24, 2016, 10:00:33 PM
Also, being pansexual means that sex and gender are not a factor for sexual attraction, but I don't think there's a word for someone who's attracted to "everyone, at any time", since I doubt those exist in real life. There might, though. I just haven't heard of any real cases.

Maybe xenosexual. I doubt it's a word, but it is more accurate. Honestly, that's the kind of comment you could put on the site, let the others debate it out. ;)

How about "slut"? ;-]
Sounds accurate.
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Darkmoon

It sounds like shaming. It's rude to compare him to actual sluts. He's sooooo much worse.
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llearch n'n'daCorna

True. Perhaps gigilo? Even then, that's not as open as he seems to be...
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Gabi

Anyway...

#2651: "slaughters"=>"slaughtered"
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Darkmoon

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Gabi

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Gabi

#778
#2686: "Look whatever"=>"Look, whatever"

#2694: "We're hereto"=>"We're here to"

#2698: "cauing"=>"causing"
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Gabi

#2706: Was the "you about to get schooled" (without the verb) intentional? It's always hard to tell when Angel's speaking.

And now I'm wondering why Sprockets's hair changes colors.
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