Started by Tapewolf, August 26, 2009, 03:43:20 AM
Quote from: llearch n'n'daCorna on August 26, 2009, 04:05:54 AMWell organised story, Tape. I liked it, and it tied up a few loose ends well.
Quote from: Tapewolf on August 26, 2009, 07:42:27 AMThanks. One of the problems I have is that it's a bit too dependent on having read FH to properly understand the interaction between Dorcan and Keaton...
Quote from: Keaton the Black Jackal on September 08, 2009, 08:06:15 AMOh CHRIST I loved this to pieces. You've heard me praising you over AIM, but I should remind you that you are several kinds of awesome, Tape.
Quote from: Cogidubnus on October 28, 2009, 12:45:30 PMEvery time somebody got shot, I was hearing the Halo announcer. "Double Kill! Triple Kill! M-m-m-m-m-monsterkill!" That was well written and very amusing. It perhaps speaks badly of me that I might pick up a golf game like that.
Quote from: Cogidubnus on October 28, 2009, 12:45:30 PMEvery time somebody got shot, I was hearing the Halo announcer. "Double Kill! Triple Kill! M-m-m-m-m-monsterkill!"
Quote from: the storyThe monster was coming close and Dorcan was running out of rounds. He knew that next time it would be for keeps. Diving, he grabbed the caddy and ran. His enemy was slow to turn and Dorcan was ready for this. He touched the side of his caddy and it whirred, vomiting out the clubs and rifle. A protrusion extended from its side and he picked the thing up, resting it upon his shoulder.
Quote from: Fibre on October 30, 2009, 01:04:45 AMI did have to read this part several times to figure out what was going on... there's a rocket launcher built into the caddy?
Quote from: wuffnpuff on December 16, 2009, 02:07:44 PMOooo! Very neat! It can be frustrating to qualm someone's fears, especially about themselves ^^ but it's cool to learn more about Nigel
QuoteOh, and on a bit of a side note.. at the end I couldn't help but think a bit about Full Metal Alchemist ^^
Quote from: Tapewolf on December 16, 2009, 02:42:58 PMI wouldn't know.
Quote from: ChaosMageX on December 24, 2009, 03:34:54 AMI'm not sure if demons have the ability to fully conceal their back-wings. They may only be able to fluctuate the size based on their power output, but I wouldn't know.
QuoteI'm also not sure if demons have horns (unless their base species has horns). None of the demons seen so far in the main comic have horns other than those possessed by their base species, except for DP, and those are implants, as stated in his cast page.
QuoteAlso, if you want to see some Full Metal Alchemist, you can watch episodes on Adult Swim Video.However, I wouldn't suggest watching it right now, as it's near the end of the series and it might spoil some things for you, since you haven't seen it before. Wait a few months and you'll be able to watch the series from the beginning.
Quote from: Tapewolf on December 24, 2009, 05:19:24 AMQuote from: ChaosMageX on December 24, 2009, 03:34:54 AMI'm not sure if demons have the ability to fully conceal their back-wings. They may only be able to fluctuate the size based on their power output, but I wouldn't know.They can if they use a concealment charm like Kria's.
Quote from: llearch n'n'daCorna on December 24, 2009, 05:36:08 AMI do note that those have side effects, which you (the original poster) should pay attention to...
Quote from: Sofox on December 24, 2009, 10:48:49 AMLove the stories Tape.I think the second one is my favourite, mixing golf and Doom just seems to write itself.The other two are nice, but they seem tied into other stories I haven't read so it's hard to appreciate them in and of themselves. Still pretty good.
Quote from: Gabi on December 24, 2009, 05:56:04 PMInteresting story. Is a sequel coming along?
Quote from: Gabi on December 25, 2009, 09:08:50 AMOK, that was a weird ending even for that sort of punishment, but I guess it suits Daryil. So... he's actively trying to maintain his clan's reputation for insanity, and Jakob is helping him? That would explain a few things.