[Story] Furrae Chronicles - Chapter 46 (25/06/2008)

[Gareeku]

Hey! No advertising in this thread!! (just kidding)

Thanks for pointing out the errors, Hilary. I would do it, except i don't notice them until someone else points them out.

[Gareeku]

*drops off chapter 34* >.>

[Tapewolf]

Gripping stuff.  No drop-dead obvious errors, either.

[Hilary]

Excellent chapter! I was wondering when Charline would show up again...

[Gabi]

Ok, now it was her, there's no denying it. The new chapter was exciting, and even though I'm still wondering how you manage to write this fast, I'm now hoping you can keep at it because I want to know what happens next.

[KarlOmega1]

Oh my! That was unexpected...

[Suwako]

Extensive fighting lot's of action and great battlescenes are what describes this Chapter the best.

Another Excellent chapter, To quote hilary.

[Paladin Sheppard]

Nice one man now where's that lion succubus when ya want her 

[Alondro]

*Charline ooozes in from the shadows*  Ah yes, puppet jewlery.  A delightful technique.  Not quite as thorough as complete soul manipulation and less powerful, but it doesn't carry the risk of personal injury should the puppet's soul be damaged, due to the intertwining effect of that level of direct control.  But my my, Gareeku has a dark side to twist.  How useful... >:}

[KarlOmega1]

Watch it, Charline...or I'll have one of my characters along with Ramsey go Ninja on your can...

[James StarRunner]

Holy cow!

I'm gone for a little while and I see this massive update! Great job Gareeku! Though I suppose I should wake you up after having punched your lights out...

Guess it was convenient to have an angel around though...

[Nikki]

*cough*xzebattlepose*cough*

This was a dream that i had...where some dude was bullying Kio and Zet..and i went crazy and i was in this pose XD

Ok, i'm probably going to sound like a total ass now, but...shouldn't this be in its own thread? 

Thanks for the feedback, everyone.

i'm too lazy tostart my own thread at the moment

Awesome Stuff Cuddle-wolfie!!

[Gabi]

Speaking of Gareeku, does anyone know where he currently is?

[Paladin Sheppard]

not seen him on MSN for a couple of days but I'm sure he'll turn up.

[Nikki]

he should be on in a few days...

[Gabi]

A few days? Then I guess I should take him out of this round of Invisible Friend. *Sighs.* I wish he had told me.

[Nikki]

don't take my word XD i'm just guessing XD

[Vaguely Creepy]

Now that's what I call entertainment!

I do have a minor quibble in Chapter 34 for when Gareeku comes back, though. This phrase:

In doing so, the choking of the succubus also caused the shadow creatures to dissolve into nothingness, due to the now-unconscious succubus not being able to keep her control on them while being choked

Seems a little unwieldly, a bit of a run-on. Maybe something like this?:

"As Gareeku tightened his grip, the shadow creatures began to dissolve into nothingness, no longer powered by their now-unconcious creator."

Or something like that. Just a suggestion.

[Gareeku]

Sorry Gabi, but i had work, coupled with the fact that my grandmother, who i was very close to, died on Friday morning, so naturally everything else had to take "a back seat", so to speak.

Thanks for the little correction, VC. I'll get on to correcting that asap.

[James StarRunner]

Sorry to hear about that Gareeku. I just noticed one little oversight (likely on my part): When James tries to use any of his angelic powers/abilities, he must take off his glove, otherwise it will prevent him from using them (ex: making his skin hard, increased speed, light magic...)

[Nikki]

Sorry Gabi, but i had work, coupled with the fact that my grandmother, who i was very close to, died on Friday morning, so naturally everything else had to take "a back seat", so to speak.

Thanks for the little correction, VC. I'll get on to correcting that asap.

awww...poor Gareeku...*cuddle-luffs*

[tenlaius]

but kickinz!

and sry to hear about yer lose gareeku  
let the mows cheer you up!

[Tapewolf]

Sorry Gabi, but i had work, coupled with the fact that my grandmother, who i was very close to, died on Friday morning, so naturally everything else had to take "a back seat", so to speak.

Sorry to hear that.  Happened to me as well recently.

[Aldoun]

Sorry to hear that. My uncle passed away a few years back so I know the feeling.

[Gabi]

I have to say what everyone else has already said, but I am sorry to hear that. Don't worry about the forum, we can wait as long as we know the reason.

[Vaguely Creepy]

Hey, we'll wait even if we don't know the reason.

I'm sorry to hear about your grandmother. Take your time getting back. We don't mind.

[Gareeku]

Thank you for all the kind words, everyone, they are very much appreciated.

I've got another chapter up now, too. It helped me take my mind off the recent 'events', so at least its something to do.

[Paladin Sheppard]

Did my nitpic via MSN but anyways..
So the kid is begining to act like a hero

[Suwako]

I like the chapter  not only because Nero finally show that he can be a hero, eventough he´s an airhead  I hope Aisha makes it  there alive.

[Gabi]

Aiyno has summed it up nicely. And I'm surprised that you've managed to come up with a new chapter so soon, but I'm not complaining. I enjoyed reading it.