[CVRPG Forum] - Typos

[Darkmoon]

It doesn't change color. She has multi-colored hair. Purple on one side shifting to brown on the other. It's just a weird dye-job.

And yeah. Angel is just speaking in slang.

[Gabi]

Now I can only see the strips which are already public, but I'll at least help with those.

#2710: "Do I look like a warrior."=>"Do I look like a warrior?"

#2711: "How sentient is she."=>"How sentient is she?"

#2717 comment: "All thing considered"=>"All things considered"

#2723 comment: "that as always been"=>"that has always been"

#2724: "You didnt have control"=>"You didn't have control"
Comment: "Once it clearly establishes the rules"=>"One, it clearly establishes the rules" (or something like that).
It also serves a third purpose: humiliating Darkmoon yet again.

#2726 comment: "He's start talking over that art"=>"He'd start talking over that art"

#2729 comment: "when I setup"=>"when I set up"
Also, it's probably the cultural gap, but I fail to see how Claypool's skin color makes any difference in how the scene plays out.

#2425 comment: "Who knows with magic."=>"Who knows with magic?"
And why are the strip numbers out of order? 2730 followed by 2682 and then 2425?!

#2739 comment: "s silly little RPG comic"=>"a silly little RPG comic"

#2641 comment: "the character was speaking for themselves"=>"the characters were speaking for themselves", or maybe "the character was speaking for themself" if you're using singular 'they'.
Also, messy numbering again, should probably be 2741.

#2742 comment: "wasn't even stretch a tad"=>"wasn't even stretched a tad"

#2744 comment: "Just keeping an eye our for you guys"=>"Just keeping an eye out for you guys"
"or official Gertie"=>"or officially Gertie"
And the phrase "I didn't want it to get confusing what kinds of enemies the Siren/Gertie was going up against" is confusing to me.

#2745 comment: "how I would have do"=>"how I would have done"

[Gabi]

That was for CVRPG. Now for DSWC:

Villains #751: "rfit"="rift"
Comment: "of his Death can even be killed"=>"of whether Death can even be killed"

Heroes #752 comment: "for fight Dracula"=>"to fight Dracula"
"CVRPG IV a good story"=>"CVRPG IV is a good story"
"for reason"=>"for reasons"

Heroes #753 comment: "way back when DSWC rebooted itself."=>"way back when DSWC rebooted itself..."

Villains #754: "in a expeditious manner"=>"in an expeditious manner"
"What are you talking about."=>"What are you talking about?"

Villains #755: "Hey you can stay here"=>"Hey, you can stay here"

Heroes #756: "aimed to far"=>"aimed too far"
"Or was was"=>"Or I was"

[Darkmoon]

Done.

And the phrase "I didn't want it to get confusing what kinds of enemies the Siren/Gertie was going up against" is confusing to me.

Effectively, if all the ships had been different sizes, different colors, it could be confusing, long run, what ships were bad guys and what were good guys. Not in the strip specifically, but long term.

[Gabi]

Thanks.

Heroes #757: "I won't work"=>"It won't work"
"he always come back"=>"he always comes back"

[Gabi]

[Post edited because I was finally able to get in!]

CVRPG #2753: "we've here"=>"we're here"
"in charge of this facility."=>"in charge of this facility?"

CVRPG #2756: "irradicate"=>"erradicate"

CVRPG #2757: "expceted"=>"expected"

Heroes #760: "poiwer vacuum"=>"power vacuum"

Villains #760: "not,in fact"=>"not, in fact"
"fates own schedule"=>"fate's own schedule"

Heroes #761: "no it's not"=>"no, it's not"

[Darkmoon]

Done. And there's even more comics in there now.

FYI, while you're tinkering around, feel free to mess with adding cast to comics. I won't stop ya. Also, if there are any characters you feel need bios, just let me know. Limit it to any characters that have CVRPG-style sprites, but otherwise: go to town.</p>

[Gabi]

Nice! I don't think I could do your characters justice if I wrote their bios, though. But I can help proof-read them. Umm... How can I reach them?

Heroes #765: "Who are you,, sir?"=>"Who are you, sir?"
"decendent"=>"descendant" (I read that "descendent" is also acceptable, but less commonly used).

Villains #767: "is it do hard"=>"is it too hard"
"find a palce"=>"find a place"

[Darkmoon]

Oh, don't worry about writing them -- I'll take care of that. But if you see anyone that doesn't have a bio, but you think has a prominent enough role to require one, let me know. I might not have caught everyone just yet.

[Gabi]

OK, thanks.

Heroes #769: "villiages"=>"villages"

Heroes #771: "which way the nest"=>"which way to the nest"

Heroes #772: "definately"=>"definitely"
"that;s"=>"that's"

[Gabi]

Villains #775: "I guess I need something to do.."=>"I guess I need something to do."
"Where are those blasted minions at?"=>"Where are those blasted minions?"

Villains #778: "a hostile take over"=>"a hostile takeover"

Villains #780: "rng for thee"=>"ring for thee"

CVRPG #2772: "what happened when we try"=> either "what happened when we tried" or "what happens when we try"

[Darkmoon]

Are you sure 2772? I checked it and I don't see any text that matches. Nor for 2770, 2771, 2773, or 2774.

[Gabi]

Yes, it was 2772. Where Claypool says "We saw what happened when we try barreling through the front."

[llearch n'n'daCorna]

I dunno. It's an unusual usage, I grant you, but it still fits in the vernacular.

Your english teacher would probably have kittens, but the meaning still gets through.

[Darkmoon]

Yes, it was 2772. Where Claypool says "We saw what happened when we try barreling through the front."

It is a split tense, so I probably should fix it...