[comic] Rejected! Pages 17 thru 26 color

GabrielsThoughts · January 20, 2009, 05:24:38 PM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/elsewire-fnl.jpg

I compressed a three page story into a one page funny, and it effectively concludes the time travel story arch... good thing too it was irritating the hell out of me.

GabrielsThoughts · January 22, 2009, 12:29:28 PM

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GabrielsThoughts · January 22, 2009, 03:44:24 PM

Colored...

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/lsm22-1.jpg

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/lsm23-1.jpg

GabrielsThoughts · January 27, 2009, 12:39:40 AM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/fn011.jpg

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hello

GabrielsThoughts · January 28, 2009, 01:39:26 AM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/fn013.jpg

GabrielsThoughts · February 03, 2009, 05:30:34 PM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/lsm24.jpg

Haxxor is choking on his shirt collar in the last panel.

GabrielsThoughts · February 04, 2009, 04:21:13 PM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/fn014.jpg

GabrielsThoughts · February 06, 2009, 01:27:48 AM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/lsm24col.jpg

Tapewolf · February 06, 2009, 04:23:12 AM

I think the 'FLOOF' in the second panel makes it.

GabrielsThoughts · February 13, 2009, 09:07:37 PM

http://nio.smackjeeves.com/comics/159759/fools-night-out-pg14/

http://nio.smackjeeves.com/comics/159980/fools-night-out-pg-15/

Tapewolf · February 14, 2009, 04:32:31 AM

She didn't notice the collar?

GabrielsThoughts · February 14, 2009, 11:09:16 PM

I don't know I thought some people would find a "bear" scary while others would just as soon kick them in the junk like John West. When I was a kid, about four years old, my dad was buying a tractor trailer from these two "Seigfreid and Roy" type guys they had three or four of them fenced in the back yard. at the time I thought the bears were really cool, but now that I'm older I'm thinking "they could (and almost did) eat me alive!" but still I remembered "people keep bears as pets." while I don't think it's very common, as I have yet to meet people who own bears ever again. I thought someone in Las Vegas would be just as likely to own a bear... plus when we first came to Las Vegas there was a pet store up the corner from my sister's apartment complex that was selling Lynx/Bobcat kittens... anyways I figured you _could_ own a bear as a pet if you wanted too. and with Curtis on a pixy stick and or couch syrup and or metabolic syndrome or whatever induced ecstasy high, I began thinking along the lines of "how can I highlight crazy?" and that was where the page came from.

but seriously, collar or not I think I'd rather not approach a strange dog.

GabrielsThoughts · February 17, 2009, 01:03:52 PM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/lsm25.jpg

I'll get to work on coloring this one after I've finished my homework

GabrielsThoughts · February 18, 2009, 01:06:01 PM

http://nio.smackjeeves.com/comics/556939/lsm25/ <---final version, fixed dialog and some color

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/404-error-1.jpg

Tapewolf · February 18, 2009, 01:29:07 PM

Very nice. I do like your wolf design.

GabrielsThoughts · February 20, 2009, 11:53:46 PM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/fn017.jpg

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http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/fn019.jpg

Pages 18 and 19 were tacked into the story in 2007, they were quickies I made on the same day it was initially based on one of dark moon's avatars.

EDIT: thanks for commenting Tapewolf

GabrielsThoughts · February 25, 2009, 01:11:27 AM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/lsm26.jpg

I lost the psd, so expect the bubbles to be a little off when it gets colored.

GabrielsThoughts · February 27, 2009, 06:14:29 PM

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three pages to go w007!

GabrielsThoughts · March 01, 2009, 08:56:50 PM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/lsm26col-1.jpg

I must be doing something right this page is my lowest rated yet and the only explanation I can think of is that it features the minor villains... as mentioned before I lost the psd for this one , so it took a little longer to fix it up again.

Tapewolf · March 02, 2009, 04:48:46 AM

I must confess I'm a little confused about the bottom half. The only actually furry person we've seen before was the werewolf guy, wasn't it? Either these are new characters I've simply lost track of who's who.