[comic] Rejected! Pages 17 thru 26 color

GabrielsThoughts · October 02, 2008, 04:46:49 PM

Something new

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and the original... which is now a dream sequence

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Let's Scare Melissa...

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Santa vs the chiplets

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Tapewolf · October 02, 2008, 05:01:11 PM

Doesn't this carry on from Let's Scare Melissa?

GabrielsThoughts · October 08, 2008, 12:58:46 PM

(Tapewolf was Pm'd with a response to his inquiry if you're curious)

The dialog is almost identical to the original version of the story...the only change was Adam's dialog, which was changed from "how was your day" to "peekaboo" because the current time line hasn't established that he could speak.

GabrielsThoughts · October 14, 2008, 12:14:21 PM

yeah update

GabrielsThoughts · October 31, 2008, 06:57:50 PM

Update.

Midterms are done! w00t! 6 more weeks this semester 4 were essay mid terms Three were due last week and then and ther was a six chapter exam and a three chapter exam and before that I have three chapter exam, so I didn't really have much time to anything the past couple of weeks. :p I din't color, because my eyes are in pain/strained from constant reading, writing, and whatever, will color this later

Tapewolf · October 31, 2008, 07:05:39 PM

Oh, now this should be interesting.

GabrielsThoughts · November 14, 2008, 01:55:45 AM

update

llearch n'n'daCorna · November 14, 2008, 03:36:49 AM

*wince*

"Immediate", "thief", "amateurs"...

GabrielsThoughts · November 18, 2008, 11:23:54 AM

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behold a minor distraction

GabrielsThoughts · November 24, 2008, 12:13:25 AM

update...kinda

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GabrielsThoughts · December 08, 2008, 12:23:56 AM

not really an update, but I was probably never going to draw it again anyway.

GabrielsThoughts · December 13, 2008, 09:25:49 PM

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Tapewolf · December 14, 2008, 06:54:34 AM

You've got a chunk in panel 5 where you've used pure white instead of off-white. Have you considered using a decimation filter or something to make it entirely black-and-white?

GabrielsThoughts · December 18, 2008, 12:56:21 AM

behold an update... it's a pre-Christmas miracle

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GabrielsThoughts · December 21, 2008, 02:37:01 PM

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GabrielsThoughts · December 25, 2008, 01:38:23 PM

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llearch n'n'daCorna · December 25, 2008, 03:08:20 PM

Yeah, I can see that 911 call being well listened to... ;-]

GabrielsThoughts · January 06, 2009, 03:11:12 PM

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GabrielsThoughts · January 08, 2009, 07:18:27 PM

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GabrielsThoughts · January 09, 2009, 08:29:42 PM

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Tapewolf · January 09, 2009, 08:34:27 PM

I like it. Have you changed your line-art technique? It looks a lot cleaner than before.

GabrielsThoughts · January 10, 2009, 02:47:33 PM

replied through private message

Tapewolf · January 10, 2009, 02:55:35 PM

Quote from: GabrielsThoughts on January 10, 2009, 02:47:33 PM
replied through private message

Yeah, I've wondered why you do that, since I might not be the only one who's interested in the answer...

llearch n'n'daCorna · January 10, 2009, 04:50:20 PM

Quote from: Tapewolf on January 10, 2009, 02:55:35 PM
Quote from: GabrielsThoughts on January 10, 2009, 02:47:33 PM
replied through private message
Yeah, I've wondered why you do that, since I might not be the only one who's interested in the answer...

I know I am..

GabrielsThoughts · January 10, 2009, 08:01:01 PM

I respond in pm's because 1) I'd never use the system otherwise 2)Mystery increases the level of suspense [this is why magicians never perform the same trick twice in front of the same audience, it makes the magic seem more miraculous] 3) if there is no mystery [for example if everyone knew the story was readily available and had been since 2004 minus a hand full of pages that I tacked on in 2007.] the laws of diminishing returns would indicate that no one would wait for the next installment. 4) the style is from 2004, I also have a 1999- 2001 style that is simmilar to JTHM/Invader Zim. The first five pages were used for my storyboarding class final.

Knowing that the comic is mostly from 2004 would make it loose some of it's coolness, the more than seven hours of coloring for the current page (Fools night out page 6, which I had to do twice because the program crashed and while it took less time the second time around I could and would have spent the same amount of time updating Let's scare melissa), which I'm only updating so that I can get to "the (fur) Real world" which I want to finish so I can get to the next storyline etc... however , if the audience has already read it already, then they might not want to read it a second time and the 16 odd people who actually read the comic might drop off and not read the story because it's not updating...and miss the fact that it actually is updating... answer your questions?

GabrielsThoughts · January 14, 2009, 10:44:27 PM

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Tapewolf · January 15, 2009, 07:42:42 AM

Are rabbit-creatures normal where they come from?

GabrielsThoughts · January 15, 2009, 07:42:05 PM

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Azlan · January 16, 2009, 08:54:48 PM

Well Eastwood does look and act like a mirror universe Tails, without the goatee though...

GabrielsThoughts · January 17, 2009, 03:54:27 PM

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