a horrible DMFA pornfic...and a vocal reading thereof!(NSFW)

[Darkmoon]

Sadly, I don't have the sprites for that.

[Eibborn]

Jesusgodchrist.

Edited upon completion
IS ANYONE ELSE REALLY AROUSED RIGHT NOW? SERIOUSLY?

(Dieing of laughter the whole way through. XD)

[icarus]

eibborn XD i will punch you on sabrous for that.
in the face
WITH A CACTUS

[Eibborn]

I LOOK FORWARD TO IT.

[Supercheese]

Forsooth, my gut, it is injured! It hurteth from much chortling and merriment at the expense of some poor soul who has naught any vestige of literary talent, nor any firsthand (or even secondhand) knowledge of copulation.


EDIT: (Ok, actually, the reading is at least half of the hilarity, if not more.)

[Zedd]

Make sure you dont put the cacti anywhere else...It's nasty
Why not use a spoon to hurt him? 

[Izzy]

Wow... just wow... that made me laugh. It also coincidentally made me register just so I could comment. I loved the commentary for the first part and gave the actual fic a very very quick scan through. I laughed... I laughed even harder when I looked to part 2 and the guy wondered why people hadn't commented

[rabid_fox]

God dammit. I'm an English teacher. That wounded me.

[Fuyudenki]

I don't think I've laughed that hard in a long time, I was almost in tears.  I think it being porn pretty much precludes it being good.  The annotations were by far the best part.

[rabid_fox]

A true working class hero.