[art] James' Mixed Nuts - Hanna fur reference 2.0 (mild adult content)

Started by James StarRunner, May 01, 2012, 08:00:07 PM

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James StarRunner

Other thread is full of stuff and well off the map, so I figured it's time for a new one. I'll try to put up some drawings, 3d, voice acting, writing, and other artsy things in here. Hence the name 'Mixed Nuts'. Though I don't intend to put up hard porn or gore, I'm covering myself just in case there's really anal bosses out there.

First off I'll put up what I've been working on recently with my wife's character, Hanna StarRunner


It's a work in progress. I'll put up the coloured version later. I have to be careful with the laptop still.

Here's some information for those who want to use this as a reference right away:

The symbol in the upper left corner is the magnified image of the house marking over her right breast. No, not clan marking, though it does fulfill some similar purposes. It's all black and the triangle is just to show that it fits in a triangular bounding box.

Notice there are no paw pads on her hand. The shaded parts of her hair are the typical spots where she dyes it blue (or any colour she currently wants). She doesn't always have it dyed. Her hair is generally all silver-white otherwise. The band she uses as her ponytail is enchanted. If that were to come off, her angel wings will show. These wings are all white, as is her fur. She has no headwings since she is not a cubi, but an angel.

Her nose and insides of her ears is pink. Her eyes are yellow.

If there's any questions, just let me know and I will try to answer them. If I don't know, I'll get my wife to answer.

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Hanna fur reference 2.0 

Gabi

#1
I see she's quite... endowed.

Are there that many Cubi around here that you have to explicitly clarify that she's not one of them? :\ Probably yes, Cubi are the new Beings around here.

Anyway, that was a great description, and her waist looks great. The rest is good... the legs look quite long, but some people have long legs. Or perhaps the head is a bit small in comparison to the rest of the body? I'm not so sure, it may become clearer once you've inked it. I'm also unsure whether a woman can have breasts of that size without being overweight, but I'm well aware of how common it is among artists to emphasize certain attributes.

Oh, and I like her eyes, her hair and the expression on her face. :)
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James StarRunner

Quote from: Gabi on May 01, 2012, 08:29:05 PM
I see she's quite... endowed.

Are there that many Cubi around here that you have to explicitly clarify that she's not one of them? :\ Probably yes, Cubi are the new Beings around here.

Anyway, that was a great description, and her waist looks great. The rest is good... the legs look quite long, but some people have long legs. Or perhaps the head is a bit small in comparison to the rest of the body? I'm not so sure, it may become clearer once you've inked it. I'm also unsure whether a woman can have breasts of that size without being overweight, but I'm well aware of how common it is among artists to emphasize certain attributes.

Oh, and I like her eyes, her hair and the expression on her face. :)
Actually, the dimensions all came from Jana. "Make that bigger, that smaller..." She wanted the breasts that size, I actually had them smaller originally.

And yes, I totally have to say non-cubi. There's more fan-made cubi here than should exist in all of Furrae. :B

littlekreen

I think it's just the lack of shading that makes it look odd. Though normal leg to body radios are something around 1-1.4? She looks at or past the top end.

James StarRunner

Quote from: littlekreen on May 01, 2012, 08:40:46 PM
I think it's just the lack of shading that makes it look odd. Though normal leg to body radios are something around 1-1.4? She looks at or past the top end.
Hmm... her legs are meant to be a touch longer, but I think I see what you mean. I think I'll bring her knees up a bit and bring the lower legs with it.

Nyil

Hey, she's got a cute face! I'm with Gabi here, I like the eyes a lot, they're well angled, spaced really well and they help light up her face. Really, the thing I'd work on is just to trade some of that leg length in for some torso length - just a wee tiny bit. Her overall height looks appropriate to me, though; I think she's lookin' good!
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James StarRunner

Quote from: Nyil on May 01, 2012, 10:33:41 PM
Hey, she's got a cute face! I'm with Gabi here, I like the eyes a lot, they're well angled, spaced really well and they help light up her face. Really, the thing I'd work on is just to trade some of that leg length in for some torso length - just a wee tiny bit. Her overall height looks appropriate to me, though; I think she's lookin' good!
Heh, even for a ninja assassin kitty, I still draw 'cute' :B
Don't get me wrong though, I'm glad you enjoy it!

Actually yeah, I think that's the perfect fix, much easier than moving all her legs up. Jana will get home soon. I'll tell her and do appropriate changes before I colour.

Ignuus66

Proud to be not a cubi!  :P

But yeah, she's a bit too... Matronly  :U

(credit: Gabi)

Gabi

Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
Proud to be not a cubi!  :P
Should we start a club? :P

Yes, I think Nyil's suggestion would work out quite well.
~~ Gabi a.k.a. Gliynn Starseed, APF ~~
Thanks to Silver for the yappities, and to everyone for being so great!
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techmaster-glitch

Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
But yeah, she's a bit too... Matronly  :U
Oh, speak for yourself :P

I happen to love the 'matronly' look, I like how proportioned she is, not just around the 'chest', but also her legs and waist. While thin and lithe girls certainly have their place, it's always nice to see examples of girls who aren't afraid to be a little meatier. Great work, James!
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llearch n'n'daCorna

Quote from: Gabi on May 02, 2012, 10:32:18 AM
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
Proud to be not a cubi!  :P
Should we start a club? :P

I'm in. ;-]


Nice work, James. I don't have anything particular to add, other than that I'm eager to see the finished results...
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joshofspam

The face is pleasant looking and the hair style looks cool.

The mark too, looks great. It does look like a mark that has a theme that makes me think of angel's.
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James StarRunner

Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
But yeah, she's a bit too... Matronly  :U
Too matronly to exist or for your tastes? Not trying to be dirty, but my wife has a bigger chest than that.

Quote from: Gabi on May 02, 2012, 10:32:18 AM
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
Proud to be not a cubi!  :P
Should we start a club? :P

Yes, I think Nyil's suggestion would work out quite well.
Yeah, I should make a 'Proud not to be a cubi' badge to put in the signatures or something! And yeah, Nyil's advice should fix it up nicely!

Quote from: techmaster-glitch on May 02, 2012, 11:35:40 AM
I happen to love the 'matronly' look, I like how proportioned she is, not just around the 'chest', but also her legs and waist. While thin and lithe girls certainly have their place, it's always nice to see examples of girls who aren't afraid to be a little meatier. Great work, James!
Thanks Tech! Though I don't think Hanna is that meaty, variety is always best. We weren't made in a cookie cutter after all! :3

Quote from: llearch n'n'daCorna on May 02, 2012, 01:05:12 PM
Quote from: Gabi on May 02, 2012, 10:32:18 AM
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
Proud to be not a cubi!  :P
Should we start a club? :P

I'm in. ;-]


Nice work, James. I don't have anything particular to add, other than that I'm eager to see the finished results...
Sounds like we have our first few members! :3

I'm pretty eager to see the results myself! I still have to take it easy with the laptop though. I can do little bits of work at a time.

Quote from: joshofspam on May 02, 2012, 01:22:36 PM
The face is pleasant looking and the hair style looks cool.

The mark too, looks great. It does look like a mark that has a theme that makes me think of angel's.
Thanks Josh! First comment on the marking! My wife made it herself (though I redrew it on here) and crafted it that way for that very reason. I'll tell her the great compliment!

Ignuus66

#13
Quote from: James StarRunner on May 02, 2012, 06:45:43 PM
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
But yeah, she's a bit too... Matronly  :U
Too matronly to exist or for your tastes? Not trying to be dirty, but my wife has a bigger chest than that.
You are one lucky man!  8)
(I reworded it, sorry James)
Quote from: James StarRunner on May 02, 2012, 06:45:43 PM
Quote from: llearch n'n'daCorna on May 02, 2012, 01:05:12 PM
Quote from: Gabi on May 02, 2012, 10:32:18 AM
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
Proud to be not a cubi!  :P
Should we start a club? :P
I'm in. ;-]
Sounds like we have our first few members! :3
Wooo! free cookies if you are a being, too  :P

(credit: Gabi)

James StarRunner

Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 03, 2012, 03:24:45 AM
Quote from: James StarRunner on May 02, 2012, 06:45:43 PM
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
But yeah, she's a bit too... Matronly  :U
Too matronly to exist or for your tastes? Not trying to be dirty, but my wife has a bigger chest than that.
0.o I'm not sure if your lucky or unlucky  :U
You know, I'd rather you just not say or judge anything about my wife. Your comment has crossed the border on being insulting. I'm extremely lucky to have her. She's beautiful, smart, and has a great sense of humor.

Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 03, 2012, 03:24:45 AM
Quote from: James StarRunner on May 02, 2012, 06:45:43 PM
Quote from: llearch n'n'daCorna on May 02, 2012, 01:05:12 PM
Quote from: Gabi on May 02, 2012, 10:32:18 AM
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
Proud to be not a cubi!  :P
Should we start a club? :P
I'm in. ;-]
Sounds like we have our first few members! :3
Wooo! free cookies if you are a being, too  :P
Angel... Same with my wife. But you would know that looking at my return thread. The door is behind you.

Ignuus66

I did know that, It's just that this forum needs more beings!

Thus free cookies to all beings!

(credit: Gabi)

James StarRunner

Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 03, 2012, 04:03:41 AM
I did know that, It's just that this forum needs more beings!

Thus free cookies to all beings!
...I'm not sure if that's a subtle attempt to harass me or not.

Ignuus66

#17
Quote from: James StarRunner on May 03, 2012, 05:06:17 AM
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 03, 2012, 04:03:41 AM
I did know that, It's just that this forum needs more beings!

Thus free cookies to all beings!
...I'm not sure if that's a subtle attempt to harass me or not.
Nope. It's not. You can have a cookie too  :P

Quote from: James StarRunner on May 03, 2012, 04:02:49 AM
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 03, 2012, 03:24:45 AM
Quote from: James StarRunner on May 02, 2012, 06:45:43 PM
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 02, 2012, 03:42:56 AM
But yeah, she's a bit too... Matronly  :U
Too matronly to exist or for your tastes? Not trying to be dirty, but my wife has a bigger chest than that.
0.o I'm not sure if your lucky or unlucky  :U
You know, I'd rather you just not say or judge anything about my wife. Your comment has crossed the border on being insulting. I'm extremely lucky to have her. She's beautiful, smart, and has a great sense of humor.

That was meant as a compliment, I just worded it poorly  :<
Allrght I'll word it better: You are one lucky man!  8)

(credit: Gabi)

James StarRunner

#18
Quote from: Ignuus66 on May 03, 2012, 05:23:22 AM
That was meant as a compliment, I just worded it poorly  :<
Allrght I'll word it better: You are one lucky man!  8)

That was quite the wording. I don't know if you're covering your butt now, but I'll give you another chance.

Edit: Fixed the quote, so it was clear who said what. Hope that helps...
  -- llearch

llearch n'n'daCorna

Ignuus, you've managed to be fairly objectionable in short order, here. Might I suggest you reign in your enthusiasm, and be a little more careful about what you say to who and how?

Otherwise we (ie, the mods) might be forced to do some work, and nobody really wants that.
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Ignuus66

yes, I know, I'll try to put more thought behind comments. (also I wasn't really aware of James's problems.)

I regret those comments, but it shouldn't happen again (I pm-ed with James)

(credit: Gabi)

James StarRunner

Alright, made some subtle changes with everything that's been suggested. Her torso, legs, arms/hands, and chest were altered. I'll be adding her feet with my tablet.

The old one is on the left, the new one on the right.


littlekreen

looks good to me? Not an artist but the original leg proportions just struck me as odd if I saw them on a regular person, heh.

Gabi

Yes, it looks better now. :) I still feel that her head looks a bit small in comparison with the rest of her body, but I wouldn't erase such a beautiful face.
~~ Gabi a.k.a. Gliynn Starseed, APF ~~
Thanks to Silver for the yappities, and to everyone for being so great!
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