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[GabrielsThoughts]

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Twinking is never enough, it has to be done with flare...and a crate full of broken glass.

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This is a fan comic, Cid, Abel, Fa'lina, warp aci, and anything that looks like it was borrowed from DMFA probably was. Sir Edmond belongs to Sheikahn boy (sketchy boy?) and makes a breif Cameo appearance. My sister drew page 28 from a refrence photo, and one of the fights uses a reference to batman beyond, Aries, Jason, Felonious, Chaz and other characters that look like they were made up at random are mine please enjoy.

As this is a fan comic there are a lot of misspellings if you would kindly point them out it would be appreciated.

[Tiger_T]

Cool!

 
Cookies to you for continuing your fancomic over here!

[GabrielsThoughts]

A little seasoning never hurt anyone.

[GabrielsThoughts]

trust me this is a setup for an elaborate Abel joke.

[GabrielsThoughts]

this is not that joke.

[GabrielsThoughts]

Ok, I just completed a major overhaul of the comic I fixed many of the spelling errors that I could spot.  pages 1 through 16 are now in spectacular color, woot! I also edited some of the dialouge and modified the pages to better fit your computer screen.



Please comment.

[Tapewolf]

I'll have to start from the beginning, I think.  I'm not sure why, but I always seem to have  difficulty following this thing.. perhaps the scene changes are too abrupt.  It's nicely drawn, though.

[GabrielsThoughts]

boo! can you see me

[Tiger_T]

Seems like she couldn't handle it after all.
Who would have expected that.

(Well technically it didn't happen yet...)

[terrycloth]

Abel already said she's going to die, though.

Has Cid actually fought anything yet? I seem to recall a lot of running away, begging for his life, and being saved by friends, but not so much of the personal smiting.

[GabrielsThoughts]

yes, cid has smited a Kitfox demon on pages 7 through 11... and starting now through whenever.

While we're on the subject DOES ANYONE KNOW THE MYTHOS(es) WEAKNESS(es)?


And for the administration, who do I complain to about Bill Clintons perverted and un-wanted PM's?

[Tapewolf]

While we're on the subject DOES ANYONE KNOW THE MYTHOS(es) WEAKNESS(es)?

In Gareeku's Furrae Chronicles I decided on a two-pronged attack for the Tree Woman, although their primary objective was to distract her long enough to rescue Ryn and there were two members of the party able to teleport.

In short, the swordsmen did a direct attack, while Jakob and Xze (under an invisibility spell) create an electrical barrier by deliberately shorting the building's generator systems, for the twin purposes of preventing her more distant tentacles from entering from behind, and distracting her long enough for the others to snatch Ryn and go.
Actually it seems rather silly now, but it was based on a dream, so what do you expect?

And for the administration, who do I complain to about Bill Clintons perverted and un-wanted PM's?

I thought he'd already been banned for spamming the entire forum with porn, but there ya go..

[terrycloth]

Wait, Cid == Zatanna?

And did he just accidentally release the mythos?

[GabrielsThoughts]

Yes, yes he did.

Points to terry for his obsevation.

[GabrielsThoughts]

Given Dr. Inkes age and demenor he could have easily been imprisioned in a alternate demention or even died for a good 50 or so years and returned to the land of the living or whatever without it even being noticed as anything more than a drop in the bucket.

[James StarRunner]

Is that Tapewolf's character in the latest comic?

Finally read all the comics too. Keep up the good work!

[Aridas]

This is where I go... "yaycomic!" Looks l ike things are going along well. Keep it up.

[Tapewolf]

Is that Tapewolf's character in the latest comic?

So it is!  Now the other guy I'd say is Harley*, rendered with a muzzle instead of the round Cid face of the original version.

Thinks... So that's why you were asking about Jakob and Ink.  I had nightmare visions of something like Ink and Clint.  Had you done that then yes, hell would certainly be on the agenda.

Critique time, because I just can't shut up.  'Jakob' is pronounced with a soft 'J', so his nickname is actually 'Yak' not 'Jake'.

Apart from that it's great.  Gabriel, I love you in a non-sexual way.


*I can't remember if Vulpesweasel's character is supposed to be a 'cubi or not.  He is now, I guess.

[bill]

Comic 14 wins the internet. Huzzah!

[GabrielsThoughts]

MST3k forever!

[Tapewolf]

I'm not sure if I'm allowed to say it's good if I'm in it.
Anyway, it's laet - perhaps I'll have think of something more coherent in the morning.
Well that was pretty incoherent, but I still have nothing to add.  No spelling corrections, nothing.  It's all good.

[GabrielsThoughts]

oh come on, you can't expect fa'lina to recruit them all herself.

[Castle Pokemetroid]

I like the one were he says that he lost his eye by falling down stairs and falling into a box of glass.

[Tapewolf]

You know that Cross is pretty good at disguising himself when his own creator doesn't recognise him

I must confess I'm a little edgy about him talking to core DMFA characters like Abel, but I'll let that pass

"Now it's time to go sleepy-bye, you worthless piece of garbage!"
-- Sgt, Pinback, Darkstar

[GabrielsThoughts]

Gah! Damn sharpie pens, curse them for making me use a new one!

Now I have to re-learn my sharpie skills!

[Nikki]

*read it* X3 funneh!!

[Tapewolf]

First drugged and now beaten up - it's been a fun few days for Jakob

[KarlOmega1]

First drugged and now beaten up - it's been a fun few days for Jakob

Quick! Somebody get Nurse RJ!   

[Zedd]

Medic!

[GabrielsThoughts]

mwah ha ha... ha ha ha ha ha!