[Writing] Emily - Chapter 6 (5th Nov 2019)

Started by Tapewolf, August 27, 2019, 08:51:04 AM

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Tapewolf

Quote from: Jonah21 on November 05, 2019, 05:23:25 PM
Erich? As in, Erich Taun? I seem to recall you having a character named "Erich" from before.

Yep, that one. 

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I think Ben would like Emily, at least more than he likes Mary. Hmm, I have to wonder how Emily and Mary would get along...
Emily and Aisha would probably get on a bit better.

J.P. Morris, Chief Engineer DMFA Radio Project * IT-HE * D-T-E


ZacAttac21

Quote from: Tapewolf on November 05, 2019, 07:42:42 PM
Quote from: Jonah21 on November 05, 2019, 05:23:25 PM
I think Ben would like Emily, at least more than he likes Mary. Hmm, I have to wonder how Emily and Mary would get along...
Emily and Aisha would probably get on a bit better.

Really? Mary must be even worse than I thought, then.

Tapewolf

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Quote from: Jonah21 on November 05, 2019, 08:18:46 PM
Really? Mary must be even worse than I thought, then.

Well, Emily tries to be accommodating of other people, and tries hard not to offend or disgust them.  She can pass for a Being unless she's exposed as being unnaturally strong or damage-resistant, or not ageing.
Mary, on the other hand, doesn't care what people think about her actions, or in the worst case will actually troll people by killing her victims messily just to squick other people.
("Mary!  Put that brain down and get over here!" is a line I've been meaning to use for a while...)

J.P. Morris, Chief Engineer DMFA Radio Project * IT-HE * D-T-E


Merlin

Aw no, the endddddd!

I remember you talking about the concessions bit before, still love it!

Tapewolf

Quote from: Merlin on November 06, 2019, 04:12:54 AM
Aw no, the endddddd!
I remember you talking about the concessions bit before, still love it!

Yeah, I actually refined it during Anthrocon!

As for this coming to an end, well, it was double the expected length given the plot outline I had!  I think that's pretty good value!

J.P. Morris, Chief Engineer DMFA Radio Project * IT-HE * D-T-E


Merlin

I demand more Emily

It did enjoy that ending though, the making bandits twist ended fantastically

Tapewolf

Quote from: Merlin on November 06, 2019, 04:28:05 AM
I demand more Emily

It did enjoy that ending though, the making bandits twist ended fantastically

Ah, good!  I was afraid it was too obvious.  I feel a bit sad for the Thane, though... he didn't exactly get a trial or time to settle his affairs.  But it would have ruined the flow, and besides, I guess that's kings for you.
I'm glad we've finally got a good maned wolf character, though I did have to check to make sure they actually can growl.

J.P. Morris, Chief Engineer DMFA Radio Project * IT-HE * D-T-E