[HYL] 06-03

Started by Gelpi, September 04, 2015, 01:16:33 PM

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Gelpi

My first thought was -

Keaton:  You...you know!
Fa'lina:  It's almost like I'm omniscient.

llearch n'n'daCorna

See, Keaton isn't experienced enough in hiding what she is.

Firstly, she's blatantly obviously scared as a result, totally shitting herself - not dropping a brick internally but keeping her outer view unworried. And yes, I bear in mind that at least some of that is that you can't show someone as unworried in a comic format if they're so scared they're ready to build a wall of bricks...

Secondly, she's not brazening it out at all - folds at the first sign of trouble. Which strikes me as somewhat unreasonable - anyone who has lied about anything for a few weeks has run into the problem of telling people that nothing is wrong while someone else buries a body behind the door, metaphorically speaking. You get this even with christmas presents.


Mebbe I'm just overly critical. Maybe Keaton just rubs me up the wrong way. Go figure.
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'Cubi do tend to react emotionally by default.  Also, it's likely the first time in quite a while that she's found herself in a situation she can't murder her way out of.

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