[Story] Glitch in the System

[Silver Pomeranian Genji]

Tis my Winx Club story.<-- 'Tis my Winx Club story. Three chapters and counting. If anybody has any feedback, I would be deeply grateful, and much thanks in advance.

EDIT: Link fixed.

[Tapewolf]

You might want to fix the link.

Apart from that, it does seem to rely rather heavily on the reader already knowing the scenario pretty well.  Since I don't, it's not making a great deal of sense, I'm afraid to say.

[techmaster-glitch]

IS THIS METAL ARMS: GLITCH IN THE SYSTEM? I DON'T KNOW, THE LINK EEZ BROOOOKEEENN!!

[Tapewolf]

IS THIS METAL ARMS: GLITCH IN THE SYSTEM? I DON'T KNOW, THE LINK EEZ BROOOOKEEENN!!

Just cut-and-paste it into the browser for now.  Either that or I'll fix it myself...

[techmaster-glitch]

Oh, it's not...I am filled with disappointment FOR LIFE


Ok, serious now. I mirror Tapewolf's comment.

In fact, it was here, or more specifically, at the park, that Bloom met Stella, and...well, you know the rest.

No we don't.

[Silver Pomeranian Genji]

Oh, it's not...I am filled with disappointment FOR LIFE


Ok, serious now. I mirror Tapewolf's comment.

In fact, it was here, or more specifically, at the park, that Bloom met Stella, and...well, you know the rest.

No we don't.

Sorry about the misleading title. I thought it'd be pun-worthy, considering who the main villain is and all. Anyway, the story is geared towards Winx Club viewers, in case I didn't say so in the original post, so again I apologize.