[Writings] Something I wrote...

[DoctaMario]

So I haven't done any creative writing in awhile, but I'm in need of money and saw a site that was offering a prize for 1st 2nd and 3rd place stories so I thought, "Mah, might as well." It's a bit NSFW, but it's short. Check it out and let me know (honestly please. If you don't like it, it's cool I can take it!   ) what you think. Cheers!

Here: http://storymash.com/u/DoctaMario/vuhakira/

[llearch n'n'daCorna]

Fixed your link.

[DoctaMario]

Oops!  Thanks llearch!

[Dannysaysnoo]

Very good! Just shows what you are describing and what is happening can be totally different!