Potential CVRPG Sprite: Donatello

[Darkmoon]

I wanted opinions on this. I made it, all by myself. Completely from scratch, basically. I sued a DMoon sprite as a side-by-side reference, and swiped some colors from a Donnie sprite from SNES TMNT-F, but the pose was made by me, by hand...

Anyway, opinions?

[Darkmoon]

Modded it a bit, to make the head look a bit better.

[Darkmoon]

I guess I'll keep posting them for feedback... much good that's doing...

[Xuzaf D]

He looks kinda small.

[Darkmoon]

He's the same size as the other CVRPG characters... In fact, he's about a pixel taller than all of them. Damn semi-deformed artwork.

[Jorge D. Fuentes]

You need wider shoulders if you're doing muscular CVRPG-style characters.
Use all 16 pixels of width, if possible.

He looks a helluvalot more cartoony than the CVRPG crew, though.

Your sprite is pretty good, though.  You're definitely improving.

[Darkmoon]

Well, I half expected you to jump on and revamp him :p.

[Jorge D. Fuentes]

I don't even have enough time to scratch my belly, nowadays...  *sigh*
Lots of things I wanna do, but find myself with no time to do 'em.

Oh, and that DS Castlevania (Dawn of Sorrow)  comes out tomorrow... so if I DO end up with time, that game will be stealing what precious littleof it there is left.

[Darkmoon]

Hey, at least you can play that on the bus ride to and from work.

[Destina Faroda]

The sprite really looks good, and you've been able to make more progress on one character than I have on mine.  Good work.

[Darkmoon]

His walking sprite is irking me. I really need to sit down, mod his shoulders, and tweak that walking frame some.