[Writing] Emily - Chapter 6 (5th Nov 2019)

[Tapewolf]

Erich? As in, Erich Taun? I seem to recall you having a character named "Erich" from before.

Yep, that one. 

I think Ben would like Emily, at least more than he likes Mary. Hmm, I have to wonder how Emily and Mary would get along...

Emily and Aisha would probably get on a bit better.

[ZacAttac21]

I think Ben would like Emily, at least more than he likes Mary. Hmm, I have to wonder how Emily and Mary would get along...

Emily and Aisha would probably get on a bit better.

Really? Mary must be even worse than I thought, then.

[Tapewolf]

Really? Mary must be even worse than I thought, then.

Well, Emily tries to be accommodating of other people, and tries hard not to offend or disgust them.  She can pass for a Being unless she's exposed as being unnaturally strong or damage-resistant, or not ageing.
Mary, on the other hand, doesn't care what people think about her actions, or in the worst case will actually troll people by killing her victims messily just to squick other people.
("Mary!  Put that brain down and get over here!" is a line I've been meaning to use for a while...)

[Merlin]

Aw no, the endddddd!

I remember you talking about the concessions bit before, still love it!

[Tapewolf]

Aw no, the endddddd!
I remember you talking about the concessions bit before, still love it!

Yeah, I actually refined it during Anthrocon!

As for this coming to an end, well, it was double the expected length given the plot outline I had!  I think that's pretty good value!

[Merlin]

I demand more Emily

It did enjoy that ending though, the making bandits twist ended fantastically

[Tapewolf]

I demand more Emily

It did enjoy that ending though, the making bandits twist ended fantastically

Ah, good!  I was afraid it was too obvious.  I feel a bit sad for the Thane, though... he didn't exactly get a trial or time to settle his affairs.  But it would have ruined the flow, and besides, I guess that's kings for you.
I'm glad we've finally got a good maned wolf character, though I did have to check to make sure they actually can growl.