2015/12/26 [TAC #02-18] - Everytime your inbox dings, a 'cubi gets its wings

Started by Eboreg, December 26, 2015, 09:24:58 AM

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Eboreg

At least, it's starting to look that way. I mean, seriously, this "He was a 'cubi" twist is starting to get along the lines of "It was a dream".

Good thing Illiath was willing to trust him but when his panic was literally palpable, I guess that's how it goes.
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Tapewolf

Quote from: Eboreg on December 26, 2015, 09:24:58 AM
At least, it's starting to look that way. I mean, seriously, this "He was a 'cubi" twist is starting to get along the lines of "It was a dream".

This is true.  On the other hand the story just felt flat if it didn't have the extra twist at the end.  In one of the earlier attempts I tried to tie everything together but the proof-readers nixed that because that was too cliché and reality doesn't have a neat ending like that.  So I did this but clearly I've just traded one cliché for another...

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Kuzma Volkov

Hmm soon we're gonna need a timeline for all the side stories. Sorta like that Doctor Who map of River and The Doctor.

Tapewolf

Quote from: Kuzma Volkov on December 27, 2015, 02:44:10 AM
Hmm soon we're gonna need a timeline for all the side stories. Sorta like that Doctor Who map of River and The Doctor.

Yes.  Especially as there's another one on the way in the new year.

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