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Village Square => Jayhawk HQ => Topic started by: Eboreg on May 06, 2013, 06:37:32 PM

Title: 2013/05/06 [CM #3] - Nostalgia isn't what it used to be
Post by: Eboreg on May 06, 2013, 06:37:32 PM
Poor Yak(ovlev). It's pretty obvious that his mother was the 'Cubi of the couple so you have to wonder where she went during this whole thing.
Title: Re: 2013/05/06 [CM #3] - Nostalgia isn't what it used to be
Post by: nguard on May 06, 2013, 08:01:34 PM
so that is his "headwings emergence" story. Interesting.
Title: Re: 2013/05/06 [CM #3] - Nostalgia isn't what it used to be
Post by: Tapewolf on May 07, 2013, 08:36:10 AM
Quote from: nguard on May 06, 2013, 08:01:34 PM
so that is his "headwings emergence" story. Interesting.

Now I'm starting to wonder if we should have expanded on it more.  Maybe I should look at writing his early backstory.  The trouble is that although it has some interesting moments which are not really shown in this page it kind of peters out when he gets to SAIA.  But it might be worth attempting for an 8-page short or something...

Quote from: Eboreg on May 06, 2013, 06:37:32 PM
Poor Yak(ovlev). It's pretty obvious that his mother was the 'Cubi of the couple so you have to wonder where she went during this whole thing.

FWIW:  http://project-future.org/stuff/things/Petter-final33.png
Title: Re: 2013/05/06 [CM #3] - Nostalgia isn't what it used to be
Post by: Merlin on May 07, 2013, 08:05:29 PM
Quote from: Tapewolf on May 07, 2013, 08:36:10 AM
Now I'm starting to wonder if we should have expanded on it more.  Maybe I should look at writing his early backstory.  The trouble is that although it has some interesting moments which are not really shown in this page it kind of peters out when he gets to SAIA.  But it might be worth attempting for an 8-page short or something...

That would be super cool! Another nice short backstory piece, and covering something like that would be interesting



oh wait this CM page was the last one of the buffer right
hmmmmm I should really go get the next one finished! ...when I am not sick and also have spare time, blurgh
Title: Re: 2013/05/06 [CM #3] - Nostalgia isn't what it used to be
Post by: Tapewolf on May 07, 2013, 08:18:07 PM
Quote from: Merlin on May 07, 2013, 08:05:29 PM
oh wait this CM page was the last one of the buffer right
hmmmmm I should really go get the next one finished! ...when I am not sick and also have spare time, blurgh

That would be nice, otherwise I'll have to add captions to the draft ;-)
Title: Re: 2013/05/06 [CM #3] - Nostalgia isn't what it used to be
Post by: Merlin on May 10, 2013, 07:18:57 AM
Quote from: Tapewolf on May 07, 2013, 08:18:07 PM
Quote from: Merlin on May 07, 2013, 08:05:29 PM
oh wait this CM page was the last one of the buffer right
hmmmmm I should really go get the next one finished! ...when I am not sick and also have spare time, blurgh

That would be nice, otherwise I'll have to add captions to the draft ;-)

You're just lucky my Critical Mass drafts look nothing like my own comic drafts.

(http://i.imgur.com/RAoyUJq.jpg)
Ready for inking!!