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Village Square => Jayhawk HQ => Topic started by: joshofspam on October 22, 2011, 01:27:45 PM

Title: 10/18/2011 [TANP #1] It's a family affair
Post by: joshofspam on October 22, 2011, 01:27:45 PM
Seems like we need to get the comment pages rolling for the new side story. I guess I'm just the fool to start it off in a train wreck, hmmmmmm? >:3

Seems like Page didn't start out life to good. I can see a bit of him in that woman in the background, her mother perhaps?

It also seems a little ironic  to say that to Page when he obviously has Angel blood in him. One could wonder who he inherited the wings from, considering he's the only one with wings in the room.

Windmills!!! :mowmeep So could this be where he got his first interest in technology?

Title: Re: 10/18/2011 [TANP #1] It's a family affair
Post by: Lurkie on October 23, 2011, 04:29:29 PM
They do look a bit alike, don't they?  If she is his mother, then perhaps she's a succubus doing the whole masquerade-as-a-being schtick.  That would explain why Page has wings and she doesn't.  Or perhaps she's not related at all.  Of course, the raccoon fellow could be an incubus acting the part of a particularly bad-tempered Being.  All of this is pure speculation, of course.  At this point, we don't know anything about these people, except that the one of them is Page.  After all, we've only just begun the opening act...
Title: Re: 10/18/2011 [TANP #1] It's a family affair
Post by: Ellian on October 23, 2011, 04:33:48 PM
I'm a bit astonished that nobody has yet found a pun in the name of the story.
Well, apart from that... nice work so far. What puzzles me a bit is that Page's parents apparently don't have wings and consider themselves creatures. Is he adopted, maybe?
Besides, his eyes in the last panel look pretty awesome.
Title: Re: 10/18/2011 [TANP #1] It's a family affair
Post by: llearch n'n'daCorna on October 24, 2011, 06:51:46 AM
Quote from: Ellian on October 23, 2011, 04:33:48 PM
Well, apart from that... nice work so far. What puzzles me a bit is that Page's parents apparently don't have wings and consider themselves creatures. Is he adopted, maybe?

Kria's amulet, perhaps?


As for the pun, it was so obvious nobody felt it necessary to comment, I'd guess. Certainly I wasn't leaping out of my seat to do so.
Title: Re: 10/18/2011 [TANP #1] It's a family affair
Post by: Tapewolf on October 24, 2011, 06:56:18 AM
Picking a name for this series was an absolute pain in the proverbial.  I didn't want to call it "Page's Story" or "Azrael's Story" because the story itself reminds me too much of Abel's in a number of places.
Frankly I didn't like "Turning a new Page" but pretty much everyone else I asked did, so I ran with it.
Title: Re: 10/18/2011 [TANP #1] It's a family affair
Post by: llearch n'n'daCorna on October 24, 2011, 08:39:52 AM
"Paging Through Memories"?
Title: Re: 10/18/2011 [TANP #1] It's a family affair
Post by: AmigaDragon on October 26, 2011, 01:02:31 PM
A Page Turner
Title: Re: 10/18/2011 [TANP #1] It's a family affair
Post by: llearch n'n'daCorna on October 26, 2011, 02:48:51 PM
Paging The Doctor
A Page Out Of Time
A Pageant of Memories

The options abound, if I may take a page from another book...