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Title: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Chairtastic on May 14, 2010, 05:51:52 PM
Okay, I've put this off for far too long.

Ren? Your art is nothing short of amazing. 
I'll admit, my canine facial feature recognition is a bit off, but is Jakob being silly in panel two? :U

Also, I notice Mac has some serious daggers for Josh at the moment.  So cute.
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Ren Gaulen on May 14, 2010, 05:58:42 PM
Quote from: Meany on May 14, 2010, 05:51:52 PM
Okay, I've put this off for far too long.

Ren? Your art is nothing short of amazing. 
I'll admit, my canine facial feature recognition is a bit off, but is Jakob being silly in panel two? :U
Thanks! :) And, do you mean panel 3. If so, then yes.
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Chairtastic on May 14, 2010, 06:07:58 PM
Ah yes. :P  I of course meant three...of course. :shifty
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: joshofspam on May 14, 2010, 11:55:02 PM
I wonder if Keaton's plans of revenge are well known to Jacob?

Why do I get the impression that Jacob will now be receiving the call from Keaton now? :P
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Zedd on May 15, 2010, 01:48:21 PM
Alert! A red spy in the base!
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Ren Gaulen on May 15, 2010, 01:50:05 PM
Quote from: Zedd on May 15, 2010, 01:48:21 PM
Alert! A red spy in the base!
Protect the intelligence!
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Tapewolf on May 15, 2010, 02:08:57 PM
Quote from: joshofspam on May 14, 2010, 11:55:02 PM
I wonder if Keaton's plans of revenge are well known to Jacob?

He knows what happened to her clan, certainly.

QuoteWhy do I get the impression that Jacob will now be receiving the call from Keaton now? :P
Depends whether she actually sees the message behind her :P
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Dannysaysnoo on May 15, 2010, 03:24:17 PM
Quote from: Ren Gaulen on May 15, 2010, 01:50:05 PM
Protect the intelligence!

We need to protect the briefcase!!
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: joshofspam on May 15, 2010, 04:39:22 PM
Quote from: Tapewolf on May 15, 2010, 02:08:57 PM
Quote from: joshofspam on May 14, 2010, 11:55:02 PM
I wonder if Keaton's plans of revenge are well known to Jacob?

He knows what happened to her clan, certainly.

QuoteWhy do I get the impression that Jacob will now be receiving the call from Keaton now? :P
Depends whether she actually sees the message behind her :P

Most alert signs come with a huge loud alert alarm.

She either has it on mute considering how paranoid her boss was or she's listening to her I-pod at full volume. :ipod
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Tapewolf on May 15, 2010, 04:56:57 PM
Quote from: joshofspam on May 15, 2010, 04:39:22 PM
She either has it on mute considering how paranoid her boss was or she's listening to her I-pod at full volume. :ipod

Aw, crap - I forgot to put the mute icon on it.
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Tapewolf on May 15, 2010, 05:29:30 PM
Okay, fixed.

Also, there's an alternate version which Ren wanted and I forgot to mention:

http://www.project-future.org/stuff/things/pf115go.png
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: joshofspam on May 15, 2010, 05:56:18 PM
Quote from: Tapewolf on May 15, 2010, 05:29:30 PM
Okay, fixed.

Also, there's an alternate version which Ren wanted and I forgot to mention:

http://www.project-future.org/stuff/things/pf115go.png

Just being curious.

What would be a compromising situation for Keaton's old boss?

Eating the last donut and drink the last of the coffee? Compromised agent!

Saying his favorite band sucks? Compromised agent!!

Not knowing Where his rubber ducky is? Oooooh! You better believe your a compromised agent!!!

At the very least she must be fairly relaxed with the sound alarm not going of every five minutes
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Tapewolf on May 15, 2010, 06:04:43 PM
Quote from: joshofspam on May 15, 2010, 05:56:18 PM
What would be a compromising situation for Keaton's old boss?
If his pet thought-reader notices something strange, basically.  Though they had a lot more to go in with Joshua.

QuoteAt the very least she must be fairly relaxed with the sound alarm not going of every five minutes
Indeed.  The other thing she's done at this precise moment is locked the door and put the comms system on 'do not disturb', otherwise she'd never have broken disguise.
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: joshofspam on May 15, 2010, 09:37:31 PM
Quote from: Tapewolf on May 15, 2010, 06:04:43 PM
Quote from: joshofspam on May 15, 2010, 05:56:18 PM
What would be a compromising situation for Keaton's old boss?
If his pet thought-reader notices something strange, basically.  Though they had a lot more to go in with Joshua.

QuoteAt the very least she must be fairly relaxed with the sound alarm not going of every five minutes
Indeed.  The other thing she's done at this precise moment is locked the door and put the comms system on 'do not disturb', otherwise she'd never have broken disguise.

Of course that could work for Jacob and Josh.

When she goes to check the reports she might find a message on the computer saying she has over one hundred compromised agents that she'll need to go through before she find out about Josh.

Though that might not happen it will definitely be funny when she finally finds out about this.
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Madmann135 on May 15, 2010, 10:38:24 PM
Quote from: Tapewolf on May 15, 2010, 05:29:30 PM
Okay, fixed.

Also, there's an alternate version which Ren wanted and I forgot to mention:

http://www.project-future.org/stuff/things/pf115go.png

When I saw that I instantly thought of This (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M6aRwky0W5Y).

Side note Panel 3 in context is hysterical.
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Ren Gaulen on May 16, 2010, 08:23:23 AM
Quote from: Madmann135 on May 15, 2010, 10:38:24 PM
Quote from: Tapewolf on May 15, 2010, 05:29:30 PM
Okay, fixed.

Also, there's an alternate version which Ren wanted and I forgot to mention:

http://www.project-future.org/stuff/things/pf115go.png

When I saw that I instantly thought of This (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M6aRwky0W5Y).

Side note Panel 3 in context is hysterical.
I was actually thinking of something along the lines of this:

GAME OVER
                                               Continue            Exit

"Joshua, what happened? Joshua! JOSHUAAAAAAAAAAAA!" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gwnPFryXF6g)
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Tapewolf on May 21, 2010, 01:35:14 PM
Ren seems to have dropped off the 'net as of last night, so I'm not sure when we'll be in a position to update.
The same goes for Spooks, who hasn't been around at all recently.

If I haven't heard anything from Ren come Sunday, I'll run some filler.

EDIT:

Well, Ren was hoping to finish and email me the strip last night.  No sign of it or him, so I guess he's offline again.  So near, and yet so far.
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Tapewolf on May 22, 2010, 07:28:12 PM
Okay, got the lines.  We'll be updating tomorrow.
Title: Re: 5/14/2010 [PF #115] Alert!
Post by: Tapewolf on May 23, 2010, 02:44:56 PM
Okay, at long last, it's ready.  I'm going to eat now.