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Title: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Jairus on April 10, 2009, 05:40:37 PM
Yarrr! Avast, mateys! This here now be a thread where ye can only speak like a pirate, arrr! And I must say, Niall makes a dashing scoundrel, and Kirian is a fine parrot! And all know that the meaning of life is treasure! Treasure and wenches! Not winches, though those be mighty useful on the sea! Yaarrr! Yo-ho-ho!
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Tapewolf on April 10, 2009, 05:44:26 PM
You can't see it, but the scroll says:

The Guardian
Increase in stealing shit
on the high seas

....and then a load of rubbish laid out like newspaper columns.

Also, if anyone has hints on making water look better, I would like to know.  I'll need it in a few weeks.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: techmaster-glitch on April 10, 2009, 05:45:35 PM
...Is it just me, or is there something...wrong...with Pirate-Niall's chest? And I'm not talking about the one he's standing on...
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Tapewolf on April 10, 2009, 05:46:54 PM
Quote from: techmaster-glitch on April 10, 2009, 05:45:35 PM
...Is it just me, or is there something...wrong...with Pirate-Niall's chest? And I'm not talking about the one he's standing on...

The frills, you mean?  I told Ren about that.  It is better.  Originally it looked like he had three boobs.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: techmaster-glitch on April 10, 2009, 05:50:13 PM
Quote from: Tapewolf on April 10, 2009, 05:46:54 PM
Quote from: techmaster-glitch on April 10, 2009, 05:45:35 PM
...Is it just me, or is there something...wrong...with Pirate-Niall's chest? And I'm not talking about the one he's standing on...

The frills, you mean?  I told Ren about that.  It is better.  Originally it looked like he had three boobs.
That's exactly what it still looks like... :aack
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Jairus on April 10, 2009, 05:53:39 PM
Also, I like how Kirian is trying to look through the telescope with her eye-patched eye.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Tapewolf on April 10, 2009, 06:12:16 PM
Quote from: techmaster-glitch on April 10, 2009, 05:50:13 PM
That's exactly what it still looks like... :aack

I've removed the frill.  We might update it again later if Ren can find a way.

For those who are curious, this is the old version:
http://www.project-future.org/strips/comic/strip059a.png

...comments/suggestions on the water would be much appreciated.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Jairus on April 10, 2009, 06:31:16 PM
You know, Niall needs a flag. Like, his clan marker over a pair of crossed bones.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Pagan on April 10, 2009, 07:01:06 PM
I kinda liked the frills more. A pirate shouldn't have such a flat chest.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: techmaster-glitch on April 10, 2009, 08:29:08 PM
Quote from: Tapewolf on April 10, 2009, 06:12:16 PM
I've removed the frill.  We might update it again later if Ren can find a way.
It's still the same...and I'm still using the pic-link in your sig to get to the site, if that matters.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Tapewolf on April 10, 2009, 08:31:08 PM
Quote from: techmaster-glitch on April 10, 2009, 08:29:08 PM
It's still the same...and I'm still using the pic-link in your sig to get to the site, if that matters.

Did you force a refresh on the page?
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Jack McSlay on April 11, 2009, 01:21:39 AM
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Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: techmaster-glitch on April 11, 2009, 02:18:30 AM
Quote from: Tapewolf on April 10, 2009, 08:31:08 PM
Did you force a refresh on the page?
Ah, there we go.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Sofox on April 11, 2009, 07:27:48 AM
I love the way the strip goes completely non sequitar in the second panel.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Tapewolf on April 11, 2009, 07:52:29 AM
Quote from: Jairus on April 10, 2009, 06:31:16 PM
You know, Niall needs a flag. Like, his clan marker over a pair of crossed bones.

That would be kind of cool.  I'm not sure where it could go, though.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Pagan on April 11, 2009, 08:25:41 AM
Here's a couple of more questions from a reader. Why did Niall dress as a pirate? Who took the photo? Was Niall aware of such photography? Why does Yak still have it?
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Sunblink on April 11, 2009, 08:37:32 AM
Pirates are really sexy. :3



On a serious note, I wonder why Niall was dressed like a pirate in the first place. XD

Also, great art, Ren. c:
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Jairus on April 11, 2009, 08:50:55 AM
Quote from: Keaton the Black Jackal on April 11, 2009, 08:37:32 AM
Pirates are really sexy. :3
Pirate Maiden Keaton? Heheheheh.

Quote from: Pagan on April 11, 2009, 08:25:41 AM
Here's a couple of more questions from a reader. Why did Niall dress as a pirate? Who took the photo? Was Niall aware of such photography? Why does Yak still have it?
Quote from: Keaton the Black Jackal on April 11, 2009, 08:37:32 AM
On a serious note, I wonder why Niall was dressed like a pirate in the first place. XD

Also, great art, Ren. c:
Do they celebrate Halloween on Furrae?

Quote from: Tapewolf on April 11, 2009, 07:52:29 AM
Quote from: Jairus on April 10, 2009, 06:31:16 PM
You know, Niall needs a flag. Like, his clan marker over a pair of crossed bones.

That would be kind of cool.  I'm not sure where it could go, though.
Hm... I was thinking right behind him, but it might also work as a background object.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Tapewolf on April 11, 2009, 09:03:36 AM
Quote from: Jairus on April 11, 2009, 08:50:55 AM
Do they celebrate Halloween on Furrae?

I don't know about canon, but in some of my writings I posited a similar celebration:

I placed [the body] upon my bed.  The entry and exit wounds to his head were now gone, a cheap trick.  Such grotesque uses of shapeshifting and projected illusion were a staple of the extravagant Hallows Eve parties which took place at SAIA... some of the best students had actually been mistaken for undead.

Quote from: Pagan on April 11, 2009, 08:25:41 AM
Here's a couple of more questions from a reader. Why did Niall dress as a pirate? Who took the photo? Was Niall aware of such photography? Why does Yak still have it?

From the second panel, Niall is very much aware of it.  I don't know what Ren had in mind, but my reasoning is that it was some kind of ren-fair thing, which Niall is happy to be photographed at, while not necessarily being happy to have said photograph widely distributed.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Tapewolf on April 16, 2009, 07:59:32 AM
Well, as of Tuesday we were in danger of having the strip completed in time this week, but Ren seems to be offline again.  Since the main strip will require an entirely new backdrop, I don't know how long it will take even after I get the lineart.

'Walk in the woods' will be updating on schedule tomorrow, though.  With luck I'll be able to clarify things with the main story by then.
Title: Re: 10/04/09 [PF Filler]: Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free!
Post by: Jairus on April 16, 2009, 10:28:32 AM
I am beginning to suspect that Ren's internet connection has gained sentience, and is an anti-furry.

I hope we reach him soon. And at least WitW will be up tomorrow.