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The Grand Hallway => Tower of Art => Topic started by: GabrielsThoughts on March 17, 2008, 05:49:04 PM

Title: [Comic] 09/6/08 (Pg. 16) - Let's scare melissa
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on March 17, 2008, 05:49:04 PM
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Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pgs 1 thru 3
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on March 23, 2008, 02:01:49 AM
updated.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pgs 5 and 6 added.
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on March 28, 2008, 12:42:22 PM
not intentionally obsessive had been updated.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pgs 5 and 6 added.
Post by: Suwako on March 28, 2008, 02:04:21 PM
This thread needs more comments, nice job Gabrielsthoughts
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pgs 5 and 6 added.
Post by: Tapewolf on March 28, 2008, 04:42:16 PM
I'm trying to figure out if the new strips are related to the previous ones.  Nice colouring, though.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pgs 5 and 6 added.
Post by: Omega on March 28, 2008, 05:47:36 PM
Hmmm... The story could use some coherency.
You can tell characters' emotions from their face. That's a nice talent.
Work with the background more. There's hardly any. It's one of the key elements that separates pros from armateurs.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pg 7 added.
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on March 31, 2008, 06:57:52 PM
the story is coherent, If it were a movie this would be the beginning of the third act... you know where everything ties together.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pg 8 added.
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on April 05, 2008, 03:03:19 PM
Updated, and if this page doesn't make much sense your not alone.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pg 8 added.
Post by: Suwako on April 05, 2008, 04:23:38 PM
Indeed, I am confuzzled...   :U

oh and as always nice job on  the art and other obvious redundant foolish remarks.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pg 9 added. page 8 fixed.
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on April 09, 2008, 10:04:04 AM
Thank you for reading, I apologize if Megan doesn't look quite right, I haven't officially drawn her since November.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pg 9 added. page 8 fixed.
Post by: Tapewolf on April 09, 2008, 02:18:13 PM
This should be interesting.  From their slightly bemused reaction, Megan isn't part of the team, so to speak.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pg 9 added. page 8 fixed.
Post by: Suwako on April 09, 2008, 03:14:54 PM
I like fire, and the weapon that made it.  :3
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pg 10
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on April 20, 2008, 01:12:40 PM
for those worried about l337, fear not.  Nothing short of a microwave could actually kill him... 
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pg 10
Post by: Tapewolf on April 20, 2008, 01:59:58 PM
Quote from: GabrielsThoughts on April 20, 2008, 01:12:40 PM
for those worried about l337, fear not.  Nothing short of a microwave could actually kill him... 

Interesting.  Is his brain spread throughout his mass, or in the head?  If in the head, I guess that means the bit around Sister Pop-Tart is liable to go limp or revert to a puddle of goo or something.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pg 11
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on May 10, 2008, 05:06:23 PM
Finals are done.
Title: Re: [art] project one from outer space Pg 12
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on May 12, 2008, 03:07:45 PM
I figured if I was going to make a cameo appearance as the detective, I'd  give people some clues. also it saves me the trouble of drawing out a whole action sequence.
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 12
Post by: Tapewolf on May 12, 2008, 04:58:59 PM
How did you do the typewriter effect?  You seem to have reproduced the slight bleed of the ink... the only thing which doesn't look right is that the lettering all seems to be exactly the same density...
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 13 (5-15-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on May 15, 2008, 02:15:32 PM
update
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 13 (5-15-08)
Post by: Tapewolf on May 15, 2008, 02:51:22 PM
Isn't that the traditional way to get fingerprints covertly?
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 13 (5-15-08)
Post by: Suwako on May 15, 2008, 04:40:19 PM
The last link is wrong 12.jpg should be 13

girl has attitude   >:3
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 14 (5-20-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on May 20, 2008, 03:55:28 PM
thank you.  and the comic has been updated.
the hair color is a lighting affect, because that was where the shirt was.
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 14 (5-20-08)
Post by: Suwako on May 21, 2008, 12:53:05 PM
Technology from the future sure comes in handy...  :U
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 14 (5-20-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on May 21, 2008, 01:26:08 PM
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Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pgs 15 and 16 (5-26-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on May 26, 2008, 06:35:26 PM
ok, I've been working on these pages almost non-stop since 5:30 this morning.



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Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pgs 15 and 16 (5-26-08)
Post by: Tapewolf on May 27, 2008, 05:57:49 AM
I'd have to go back and check, but didn't we have the page explaining the gun and the Weeaboo before?  Maybe it was just the script and not the drawn page...
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg17 (5-30-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on May 30, 2008, 04:26:38 PM
the script deviates slightly, but I always add something different or extra to throw people off.

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/pofos17.jpg
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg17 (5-30-08)
Post by: Tapewolf on May 30, 2008, 05:29:44 PM
Neat.  Is that blue caption in the last panel the Weaboo?
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pgs 17 and 18(5-30-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on May 30, 2008, 06:35:56 PM
yes, I thought it would be funny.

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/pofos18.jpg
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 19 (6-1-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on June 01, 2008, 04:56:27 PM
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Break time.
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 20 (6-3-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on June 03, 2008, 12:52:56 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/pofos20.jpg

almost done.
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 20 (6-3-08)
Post by: Tapewolf on June 03, 2008, 01:48:33 PM
Is the ship second-hand or something?  It looks kind of patched-up...
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 20 and 21 (6-3-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on June 03, 2008, 02:34:00 PM
I was going for a standard sixties B movie design/look  when I thought up the ship, As a way of matching it up with the comic.  that's why I didn't draw in the backgrounds. it also allows me to throw in old artwork and pass it off as new again.

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/pofos21.jpg
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 23 (6-4-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on June 03, 2008, 06:45:02 PM
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sneak up on myself.
Title: Re: [comic] project one from outer space Pg 23 (6-6-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on June 06, 2008, 02:31:02 PM
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as much as It would probably spoil the surprise, I can confirm that the robot with Megan is not being piloted by Squeaky.
Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pgs 1 and 2 (6-15-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on June 15, 2008, 12:47:02 AM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg 3(6-17-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on June 17, 2008, 04:14:01 PM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pgs 4 and 5 (6-20-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on June 19, 2008, 06:43:35 PM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pgs 4 and 5 (6-20-08)
Post by: Suwako on June 20, 2008, 03:56:39 AM
You sure are fast, or are we slow...

hmm.
Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg6 (6-27-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on June 26, 2008, 01:20:11 PM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg6 (6-27-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on July 02, 2008, 05:38:57 PM
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the best jokes are set up well in advance, for optimum funny...unfortunately I changed Bade's complaint from "jesus christ is everyone doing a flashback" because, it is only most of the comics I read which are in flashback mode, including Goblin Hollow and DMFA.... and ironically CVRPG is doing a flash forward in celebration of their 800th comic, which is basically the same thing in reverse.
Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg8 (7-19-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on July 19, 2008, 08:55:13 PM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg9 (7-22-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on July 22, 2008, 06:57:57 PM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg10 (7-25-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on July 26, 2008, 12:50:31 AM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg11 (7-30-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on July 30, 2008, 02:28:25 PM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg11 (7-30-08)
Post by: Zedd on July 30, 2008, 02:59:23 PM
I wonder what it does though..Maybe next update
Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg12 (8-4-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on August 03, 2008, 02:54:38 PM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg13 (8-13-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on August 12, 2008, 11:05:01 PM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg14 (8-19-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on August 19, 2008, 12:10:24 AM
(http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/lsm14.jpg)

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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg14 (8-19-08)
Post by: Tapewolf on August 19, 2008, 07:07:44 AM
Is that door toughened glass, or has his head gone through it?
Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg15 (8-25-08)
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on August 24, 2008, 05:08:58 PM
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Title: Re: [comic] Let's scare melissa Pg15 (8-25-08)
Post by: Zedd on August 24, 2008, 05:15:37 PM
Whoa well seems like the pase is picking up alittle
Title: Re: [Comic] 09/6/08 (Pg. 16) - Let's scare melissa
Post by: GabrielsThoughts on September 06, 2008, 08:24:57 PM
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Title: Re: [Comic] 09/6/08 (Pg. 16) - Let's scare melissa
Post by: Tapewolf on September 07, 2008, 07:47:58 AM
I'm kind of curious why the weeabo has been stuffed into a tank, but I suppose that will become clear in due course.