The Clockwork Mansion

The Grand Hallway => Tower of Art => Topic started by: Fizzbit on November 13, 2005, 01:25:29 PM

Title: Work in Progress
Post by: Fizzbit on November 13, 2005, 01:25:29 PM
Gah, I hate school. Limits my time to be creative...

This might be done today if I sit down and work on it and resist the temptation to play Curse of Darkness...

Full version can be found Here. (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v207/LauraBelmont/WIP.jpg)

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v207/LauraBelmont/WIP.jpg)
Title: Re: Work in Progress
Post by: Destina Faroda on November 13, 2005, 06:56:25 PM
Well, I'd rather wait for a good product than have none at all.  Once again, your coloring is amazing and your attention to detail astounding,

My only quibble is that the pose seems a bit weird, almost contorted.  But since the piece isn't finished, it might look that way out of context.
Title: Re: Work in Progress
Post by: Darkmoon on November 13, 2005, 10:08:13 PM
The line on the chin looks wrong. Too white. Makes it unnaturally stick out, so it seems.
Title: Re: Work in Progress
Post by: TaintedPriest on November 15, 2005, 12:56:13 PM
I of course will not pass final judgement until it is done. So far however good colors and I do not see the pose as contorted though I get the sense of vulnerability from her seeming to bare her neck.
Title: Re: Work in Progress
Post by: Destina Faroda on November 15, 2005, 03:24:02 PM
See, I would have never thought of that.  Thanks for the explanation.
Title: Re: Work in Progress
Post by: telruya on April 13, 2006, 07:06:45 PM
also the clothes they need differnt shades and folds because really  unrealistic as it is.
Title: Re: Work in Progress
Post by: Fizzbit on April 13, 2006, 08:22:08 PM
Wow... this thread is old.

And the picture isn't finished. Hence "Work in Progress"
Title: Re: Work in Progress
Post by: Nimrods Son on May 22, 2006, 05:54:44 AM
I'd give more volume to the hair to make the head look less elvish. although, just that could be your intention.
Title: Re: Work in Progress
Post by: Fizzbit on May 22, 2006, 06:57:35 AM
Again, the topic is more than a month old o_o Please read the rules concerning thread necromancy.