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Village Square => Jayhawk HQ => Topic started by: Starcat5 on February 23, 2026, 01:47:28 AM

Title: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Starcat5 on February 23, 2026, 01:47:28 AM
04-01 - Once bitten, twice shy

Don't worry, Lautrec. I don't think anyone would ever mistake you for a Gonk Droid.  :B
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: ProfesseurRenard on February 23, 2026, 11:02:32 PM
Quote from: Starcat5 on February 23, 2026, 01:47:28 AM04-01 - Once bitten, twice shy

Don't worry, Lautrec. I don't think anyone would ever mistake you for a Gonk Droid.  :B

I've lost track of how many times I've said this, but I'll say it again: I really miss the 'applaud' button.

On another note, I thought the blood-drinking was for vampires and their thralls...
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Tapewolf on February 24, 2026, 03:38:53 AM
Quote from: ProfesseurRenard on February 23, 2026, 11:02:32 PMOn another note, I thought the blood-drinking was for vampires and their thralls...

One of the ways to identify a witch was to look for the mark, which was the place where the familiar would suck blood from.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: ProfesseurRenard on March 02, 2026, 10:05:55 PM
04-02 - Small mercies

Sensible idea, Lautrec. Just be careful out there.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Starcat5 on March 16, 2026, 02:55:16 AM
04-04 - The great brain robbery

Might want to check the armory as well. I think Chekhov's Gun might be in stock.  :mwaha
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: ProfesseurRenard on March 16, 2026, 09:39:59 PM
Quote from: Starcat5 on March 16, 2026, 02:55:16 AM04-04 - The great brain robbery

Might want to check the armory as well. I think Chekhov's Gun might be in stock.  :mwaha

Heh.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: ProfesseurRenard on March 23, 2026, 09:11:43 PM
04-05 - Who is the Master?

I look forward to learning what Primagens and Progenitors are.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Raskahn on March 24, 2026, 06:26:25 AM
Quote from: ProfesseurRenard on March 23, 2026, 09:11:43 PM04-05 - Who is the Master?

I look forward to learning what Primagens and Progenitors are.

I second that. Kinda feels like starting a new RPG and there's a ton of lore books in the tutorial area. Lore(data) dump!
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Tapewolf on March 24, 2026, 08:20:44 AM
It'll take a few pages to cover this, not least because Quirk gets distracted easily.

And for those wondering, the phrase "Who is the Master?" is a reference to this: https://goonshow.org/goonshow/s8p25/
It was the cue for the guest star.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Starcat5 on March 24, 2026, 08:36:02 PM
Could be worse. At least "the" wasn't capitalized. If we were dealing with The Master, our heroes would be in a lot more trouble.  :mwaha
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: ProfesseurRenard on March 30, 2026, 11:22:54 PM
04-06 - Intrusive thoughts are a really bad thing if you're a mad assassin

Uh oh. Hope Quirk can get himself back under control.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Tapewolf on March 31, 2026, 06:20:44 AM
This may be helpful:  https://bsky.app/profile/tapewolf.bsky.social/post/3miafkssjr22n
...hopefully the site will come back soon, but if not... Well, migrating to the system running Pax Drac is a definite possibility, though not something I'd do lightly.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: ProfesseurRenard on April 06, 2026, 10:30:43 PM
04-07 - From minds to mindless

Good to see Quirk was able to get back under control.

Also, for anyone wondering what the originally planned last panel would have looked like, behold: https://pawb.fun/@Tapewolf@meow.social/116355129827459599
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Starcat5 on April 08, 2026, 05:01:11 AM
I must say that the original panel is nicely "Egyptian" coded, much like the Chozo of Metroid. Sadly, I agree with Tapewolf. Olde Timey art is best saved for "Mysterious Ancients" rather than "Asshole Slaver Ancients".
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Tapewolf on April 08, 2026, 06:26:50 AM
Quote from: Starcat5 on April 08, 2026, 05:01:11 AMI must say that the original panel is nicely "Egyptian" coded, much like the Chozo of Metroid. Sadly, I agree with Tapewolf. Olde Timey art is best saved for "Mysterious Ancients" rather than "Asshole Slaver Ancients".

As I understand it, the creator of the Protogen species is apparently selling socks at Furdu with protogens in that style and UFOs.  Merlin was referencing that, I think - which was definitely cute, but didn't really mesh with the ZOR lore I was trying to portray.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: ProfesseurRenard on April 13, 2026, 10:28:49 PM
04-08 - Protogen Revolution

Now I'm curious if the Progenitor hardliners get together to plot atrocities against Protogen neighbourhoods or the suchlike...
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Tapewolf on April 14, 2026, 05:26:56 AM
Quote from: ProfesseurRenard on April 13, 2026, 10:28:49 PMNow I'm curious if the Progenitor hardliners get together to plot atrocities against Protogen neighbourhoods or the suchlike...

In this setting the protogens have long since spread beyond the systems of their creation so that's less of an issue.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: ProfesseurRenard on April 27, 2026, 08:42:39 PM
04-09 - Primagen Primer

Oh shit! How did they find your bolthole so soon?!
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Starcat5 on May 04, 2026, 12:17:21 AM
04-10 - Ass-ass-in-ate

...in which they cut system power without going through the proper shut down sequence.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: ProfesseurRenard on May 05, 2026, 12:11:02 AM
Quote from: Starcat5 on May 04, 2026, 12:17:21 AM04-10 - Ass-ass-in-ate

...in which they cut system power without going through the proper shut down sequence.

Heh, yeah, they'll have a chore booting this bad boy up again!
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Raskahn on May 05, 2026, 04:20:03 AM
The "X for eyes" on the visor was too funny.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Raskahn on May 13, 2026, 12:11:41 PM
05-01 - Oops, my bad

"And then they all live happily together in the cloud computing paradise so you see, death isn't such a bad thing."
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: ProfesseurRenard on May 13, 2026, 08:25:57 PM
Quote from: Raskahn on May 13, 2026, 12:11:41 PM05-01 - Oops, my bad

"And then they all live happily together in the cloud computing paradise so you see, death isn't such a bad thing."

We've already started a Chapter 5 thread, mate.
Title: Re: [Xer 2 Chapter 4]
Post by: Raskahn on May 14, 2026, 03:55:20 PM
Dangit! oh well, time to boost my post numbers I guess. XD