At least, it's starting to look that way. I mean, seriously, this "He was a 'cubi" twist is starting to get along the lines of "It was a dream".
Good thing Illiath was willing to trust him but when his panic was literally palpable, I guess that's how it goes.
Quote from: Eboreg on December 26, 2015, 09:24:58 AM
At least, it's starting to look that way. I mean, seriously, this "He was a 'cubi" twist is starting to get along the lines of "It was a dream".
This is true. On the other hand the story just felt flat if it didn't have the extra twist at the end. In one of the earlier attempts I tried to tie everything together but the proof-readers nixed that because
that was too cliché and reality doesn't have a neat ending like that. So I did this but clearly I've just traded one cliché for another...
Hmm soon we're gonna need a timeline for all the side stories. Sorta like that Doctor Who map of River and The Doctor.
Quote from: Kuzma Volkov on December 27, 2015, 02:44:10 AM
Hmm soon we're gonna need a timeline for all the side stories. Sorta like that Doctor Who map of River and The Doctor.
Yes. Especially as there's another one on the way in the new year.