Noticing a huge glaring issue in panel 2. The interloper was female, yet Dorcan's mom is calling her a him in the prayer. Also, wonder what that means for Dorcan's soul in the last panel. Hopefully nothing too serious.
Quote from: Chakat Blackspots on September 19, 2014, 08:30:34 AM
Noticing a huge glaring issue in panel 2. The interloper was female, yet Dorcan's mom is calling her a him in the prayer. Also, wonder what that means for Dorcan's soul in the last panel. Hopefully nothing too serious.
Oops. This is what happens when the artist persuades you to change the sex of one of the characters after the script has been written. I'll fix that shortly.
On the plus side the change did open up a new possibility which we explore in the next chapter.
Error reading /dev/soul? Oh s***!
Quote from: Eboreg on September 19, 2014, 08:55:40 AM
Error reading /dev/soul? Oh s***!
That's like, 2 steps away from a BSOD.
Quote from: Lone_Wolf on September 19, 2014, 12:55:41 PM
Quote from: Eboreg on September 19, 2014, 08:55:40 AM
Error reading /dev/soul? Oh s***!
That's like, 2 steps away from a BSOD.
With a rather heavy emphasis on the D.
Annoyingly, we don't get back to that plot thread for almost a month...