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Title: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Turnsky on November 01, 2009, 06:46:57 AM
i made this one extra long to properly end the chapter, 6 panels just didn't do it justice.
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Tapewolf on November 01, 2009, 07:13:06 AM
It was worth the extra effort.  A good ending to the chapter.
In other news, I notice that his hair has changed colour  >:3
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Turnsky on November 01, 2009, 09:12:05 AM
Quote from: Tapewolf on November 01, 2009, 07:13:06 AM
It was worth the extra effort.  A good ending to the chapter.
In other news, I notice that his hair has changed colour  >:3

actually, it's always been that color, i just didn't highlight that fact before. (#0a0d14, for the record)
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Tapewolf on November 01, 2009, 11:42:53 AM
Mirror, since Xepher is down.
http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k216/tapewolf/foxfire/2009-11-01-ffc360.jpg
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: ShadesFox on November 01, 2009, 04:20:09 PM
Epic comic is epic~

What is next in store for Luke's future?  Probably a food fight.
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Janus Whitefurr on November 01, 2009, 06:04:56 PM
Quote from: ShadesFox on November 01, 2009, 04:20:09 PM
Epic comic is epic~

What is next in store for Luke's future?  Probably a food fight.

Hairstylist.
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Kabbalist on November 01, 2009, 06:12:46 PM
Okay, Turnsky, this was definitely worth the extra work that you put into it. Great work on the art, and great work on getting Luke somewhere that he can get a little rest. I'd imagine he needs it. Great work on the shading and backgrounds in this one; it looks like you put in some extra effort on the coloring...but maybe that's just because we've gotten back to somewhere with good lighting, instead of being rather shadowy.

By the way, the hair makes a BIG difference in Luke's appearance. Maybe it's just the fact that it's long, black, and currently a bit wild, but I think it adds a little broodiness to his expression. Granted, he's got plenty of reasons to be broody right now.

I'm looking forward to seeing where you take things, so keep up the great work.

Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Tapewolf on November 01, 2009, 06:15:16 PM
Quote from: Kabbalist on November 01, 2009, 06:12:46 PM
By the way, the hair makes a BIG difference in Luke's appearance. Maybe it's just the fact that it's long, black, and currently a bit wild,

It's blue, actually.
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Kabbalist on November 01, 2009, 11:38:36 PM
Quote from: Tapewolf on November 01, 2009, 06:15:16 PM
It's blue, actually.

My mistake. I thought that it was the mix of the lighting on hair that was "raven's wing" black. You know, that black with a natural bluish iridescence. If, however, Luke's hair is actually blue, that's both good and nifty all on its own.
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Turnsky on November 01, 2009, 11:56:28 PM
Quote from: Kabbalist on November 01, 2009, 11:38:36 PM
Quote from: Tapewolf on November 01, 2009, 06:15:16 PM
It's blue, actually.

My mistake. I thought that it was the mix of the lighting on hair that was "raven's wing" black. You know, that black with a natural bluish iridescence. If, however, Luke's hair is actually blue, that's both good and nifty all on its own.


that works too.

Really it's a severely dark blue, with a bluish iridescence, it looks black, but is really blue.... at least in my mind that works.  :U
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Garsemor on November 02, 2009, 01:21:22 AM
Great page, the work was really worth it.
Now I'm wondering what kind of hairstyle he'll get.
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: llearch n'n'daCorna on November 02, 2009, 05:24:14 AM
Spikes?
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: ChaosMageX on November 02, 2009, 10:36:30 AM
Quote from: llearch n'n'daCorna on November 02, 2009, 05:24:14 AM
Spikes?

No, most girls agree that hard, crusty, over-gelled hair like that is a turn off.  He should use __(Insert Brand Name)__ Styling Shampoo instead!

Sorry, I couldn't resist. :P
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: TheJimTimMan on November 02, 2009, 11:28:00 AM
I find it somewhat ironic that Milnea knows exactly where to find the one Luke misses the most, and I get the feeling the line "You never asked" is going to crop up at some point in the future.
I don't mind extra waiting, although to be honest this arrived much faster than most of the previous strips. Excellent work, I believe there be training montages on the horizon   :)
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Sprocketsdance on November 02, 2009, 06:40:06 PM
Of course.. big fan of the hair :3 and the wings.. oh man the wings... especially the last four panels! =D Poor Luke too.. just wanna huggle him happy  :cry
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: ShadesFox on November 02, 2009, 07:38:18 PM
I now have a vision of Chase huggling Luke, "Be happy~"

"Who are you!  Why are you hugging me!  My spleen!"
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Sprocketsdance on November 02, 2009, 07:51:35 PM
 :giggle  Chase? Don't you mean Chance?  :3
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: ShadesFox on November 02, 2009, 08:38:00 PM
Yes, I think spell checker got me there.  Happens a lot :<
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Sprocketsdance on November 02, 2009, 08:51:44 PM
Aww, it's ok ^_^ All that matters is that poor Luke gets some sort of hug.. sometime!  :boogie

:poke  Right??  :<
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Janus Whitefurr on November 02, 2009, 09:12:02 PM
Quote from: wuffnpuff on November 02, 2009, 08:51:44 PM
Aww, it's ok ^_^ All that matters is that poor Luke gets some sort of hug.. sometime!  :boogie

:poke  Right??  :<

~ dream a little dream... of me? ~
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Chakat Blackspots on November 02, 2009, 10:02:18 PM
Quite a good comic you got going here, read the entire comic in about 3 or 4 hours time.

I do have to say, as a first time reader (Tapewolf in the DMFA forums posted a link to your latest submission when the servers were down last night), that this comic is quite interesting.  Goes from the military turning people into Anthropomorphic animals for military use to suddenly being thrown into the world that is basically what DMFA and Furcadia exists in.  Thats a huge twist there.

I've been reading the DMFA comic for a good 4 years or so now.
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Turnsky on November 03, 2009, 06:55:15 AM
Quote from: kusanagi-sama on November 02, 2009, 10:02:18 PM
Quite a good comic you got going here, read the entire comic in about 3 or 4 hours time.

I do have to say, as a first time reader (Tapewolf in the DMFA forums posted a link to your latest submission when the servers were down last night), that this comic is quite interesting.  Goes from the military turning people into Anthropomorphic animals for military use to suddenly being thrown into the world that is basically what DMFA and Furcadia exists in.  Thats a huge twist there.

I've been reading the DMFA comic for a good 4 years or so now.

there's quite a few twists left in the ol' plot yet.  >:3
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: ChaosMageX on November 03, 2009, 09:40:39 AM
So, now that this chapter is done, will we finally get to find out what the heck happened to Mary, Leigh, and the rest of the wendigoes (took me forever to look up that word in the archives)?  More importantly, will Leigh and that other wendigo also get hair eventually?
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: TheJimTimMan on November 03, 2009, 08:48:50 PM
Unless I'm much mistaken, Mary has already been seen (http://www.ariannia.com/2008/01/01212008/), although not reffered to by name. Checking back (http://www.ariannia.com/2004/10/10012004/) in the archives for comparison, note the ears, eyes and hair style. It was something of a shock when I first noticed it.
But yes, I am eager to find out more about the others. I wonder how Davis is adapting to life without electricity?  >:]
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: ShadesFox on November 04, 2009, 12:52:57 AM
Haven't you ever watched Back to the Future part III?  He is probably shoeing horses and fixing wagons.
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Sprocketsdance on November 04, 2009, 08:10:08 AM
Quote from: ShadesFox on November 04, 2009, 12:52:57 AM
Haven't you ever watched Back to the Future part III?  He is probably shoeing horses and fixing wagons.

XD  a time machine is what we need! Only lets use a Ford Probe this time :3
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: llearch n'n'daCorna on November 04, 2009, 09:09:23 AM
Oh, come on. A Ford Anglia, surely?

Or perhaps a deux cheveaux? ;-]
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: LionHeart on November 04, 2009, 10:24:53 AM
Better still, how about a Mini?

Look at all the things they managed to achieve in The Italian Job (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Italian_Job). Compared to those antics, time travel should be a snap.
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: llearch n'n'daCorna on November 04, 2009, 10:50:06 AM
... The original, or the new version?
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: ShadesFox on November 04, 2009, 03:55:49 PM
My only reservation about using a European car is that that yelling "142 kilometers per hour!"  Just doesn't seem to have to same ring as, "88 miles per hour!"  Far too many syllables.
Title: Re: 01/11/2009 - [FFC#56] End of Chapter one.
Post by: Chakat Blackspots on November 04, 2009, 07:37:28 PM
Quote from: wuffnpuff on November 04, 2009, 08:10:08 AM
Quote from: ShadesFox on November 04, 2009, 12:52:57 AM
Haven't you ever watched Back to the Future part III?  He is probably shoeing horses and fixing wagons.

XD  a time machine is what we need! Only lets use a Ford Probe this time :3

No, a Mustang would be better.  Also, 88MPH is pretty easy to hit nowadays, maybe it should be increased?